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Zaptor
03-13-2013, 09:04 PM
I made this in about 2 hours trying out a new style its also a little rust breaker
http://www.filz.us/sHq

Im looking for some good critiques so i can improve.

Cruel
03-13-2013, 09:27 PM
The flip was weird. It looked like you just avoided complicated movements by using a huge amount of spacing between each huge pose. Not bad though. I don't see how you could make a fast paced fight like this though.

Ezy
03-13-2013, 09:37 PM
Hmm, it's kinda missing frames imo. The flip does look weird. Trying experimenting with more poses and adding more frames at the build up after the move.

Zaptor
03-13-2013, 09:45 PM
yeah i was having trouble with the flip and i usually don't use so much space between each movement but i thought it would give it a more fast paced feel compared to my normal way of animation. Ill try practicing using some of your advise and see if i improve. Thanks for the help and keep the comments coming.

Fastmotion
03-14-2013, 06:02 AM
In my opinion, I think you need to make him jump upward rather than having him jump down but other than that, it was a nice animation.

m0ntana
03-14-2013, 06:11 AM
You need more frames on the part where he cuts then roof thingy.

Amf
03-14-2013, 10:55 AM
none of your attacks seemed forceful and also everything that cruel said

Imada
03-14-2013, 10:57 AM
I agree Amf, there was just not enough transition frames

Tentionmaru
03-14-2013, 11:48 AM
I actually liked the high speed backflip and landing pose.

Zaptor
03-14-2013, 04:19 PM
Okay ill work on putting more frames in between each attack or movement and ill work on some of the other problems that i feel I'm capable of fixing.