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dott
03-19-2013, 12:45 PM
Finally got to animate again!
http://pat2zon.deviantart.com/art/Lefu-demo-2-360388079
cnc pls!

S-Critical
03-19-2013, 12:57 PM
Ok lets start with the CNC then.

The good thing is that you were able to make a very decent and long combos fulls of kicks, punches and weapon attacks. But to improve, some of the attacks were not clear enough and jumped ahead to the next move which seems a little bit too fast to me. Second, the way he moves on from one move to the other is pretty stiff and not enough flow and smoothing. Third, the tornado kicks could have been done a lot better if more frames were added to them so it doesn't look rushed. I would say the main thing you need to improve on is stiffness and flow. Overall it is a great animation dott! Keep it up!

Xyper
03-19-2013, 04:12 PM
I liked it a lot.
But it's a bit too fast, I know it's hard to notice when your stuff is too fast because you animated every frame and therefore see every frame.
You could ask someone around you to look at your stuff and tell you if it was too fast to fix that.
Just add some more frames here and there.

xomegax
03-19-2013, 09:01 PM
Awesome I love your effects :)