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CrewKid
03-23-2013, 10:02 PM
Lil longer than my usual 3 hit combo tests. Focusing on force here.
Gotta lil background too yeaaaaah
I like the trails, they're here to stay

SOUNDS ADDED BY REQUEST

http://crewkidda.deviantart.com/art/Feel-it-361212299?ga_submit_new=10%253A1364097636

CrewKid
03-25-2013, 07:04 PM
Let's try this again

Stickly
03-25-2013, 10:42 PM
why the fuck are there no comments???

anyway, i loved it. the movement was very fluid.

Sonicmanqaz
03-26-2013, 07:35 AM
lol one comment. This is really good. Nice scenery, nice combos, and very fluid.

Atomicapple
03-26-2013, 07:55 AM
its a pretty good animation overall but it has some problems(no animation is perfect right?).
The attacks were blocked from view by the trails. Perhaps you should make it alphaled
the movement seemed to stop and go.
it is also kinda hard to understand why the red stick figure flew up. You should add more frames to fix that.
There are also a lot of good aspects of this animation.
The black stick had some serious force. To make it even better add cracks and dust.
Also holy shit da background

overall score 4.13/5

Cruel
03-26-2013, 08:13 AM
Gravity was way off. Pretty smooth for the first part. The background hid the stickmen so it was difficult to see them due to the lack of contrast. Stiff towards the end.

All in all, not bad.

Ezy
03-26-2013, 10:38 AM
Yea, the moon is pretty bright. Covers up the stick's movements during the big attack. Maybe make your stick a little more..loose since the attacks are such powerful attacks.

CrewKid
03-26-2013, 04:22 PM
Didn't realize the background would mask the movements, sorry about that, I'll try to contrast more and maybe back the moon up a bit lol.
And you're right some dust or ground damage could help a boat load. And Cruel sorry about the gravity in that first attack but I really wanted to emphasize force so i doubleframed the change in direction (Up to Down)

Thanks everyone!