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MoraeDev
03-24-2013, 08:46 AM
http://www.fileize.com/files/dd647ea7/dad/react2.swf

complete!!

dark falcon
03-24-2013, 09:09 AM
Hmm Not Bad, What Tool You've Used ?
And Fix His and In The Last Frame When He Hit Him With The Elbow ! His Hand Seems Like If It's Broken !! It Shoulde Face Down Not Left Or Right !

Xyper
03-24-2013, 09:18 AM
Thats so cool, I wish I could do that.
His waste seems to go up a bit too much though, and I think the other guy fell a bit stiff, but maybe thats just cus you didnt make him flatten out after falling. You got lazy at the end :D
Still really cool :)

MoraeDev
03-24-2013, 08:29 PM
Ok I'll fix thos things
Thank you


Hmm Not Bad, What Tool You've Used ?

well I use brush tool with tablet.


lazy

yes I am :P

Ezy
03-24-2013, 08:32 PM
Needs more frames on the build up, and try to exaggerate the moves more

MoraeDev
03-25-2013, 02:36 AM
try to exaggerate the moves more

more exaggeration??
like blur or shaking screen?

angelina<3
03-25-2013, 04:59 AM
thats cool but need more frame >.>

Ezy
03-25-2013, 10:48 AM
more exaggeration??
like blur or shaking screen?

No, over exaggerate...hmm

For example on the first kick: His leg just comes up and kicks him. There was no build up to that move as in maybe swinging his leg foward then it going back. or having him take a step back then kicking.
Same with the punch, it just.. happens. There's no way to tell what attack is next because it lacks build up before the attack.

With sticks you can somewhat get away with not showing build up with trails, sounds, shakes, etc. With fullbody though it's another story.

Example of build up would be like a baseball. You just don't take it out of the glove and toss it. There is the whole motion of swinging your leg up, planting it foward, and then throwing the ball. I could be wrong, I don't play baseball..

If you still don't understand I can make a somewhat quick picture or something.

MoraeDev
03-25-2013, 10:25 PM
oh..
ok i'll try it.
thank you for your guide.

Stickly
03-25-2013, 10:35 PM
the Simply Business is strong in this one...

MoraeDev
03-25-2013, 11:31 PM
the Simply Business is strong in this one...

well I love that..
maybe I'm inspired by that.
i didnt mean to make it similary though :P