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Sharp
03-25-2013, 07:34 PM
Sharp's slightly less dumb thread


Yep, as the title says

Newest animation: (javelin collab entry)

http://www.filz.us/files/df8a62bc/d4e/javelin_collab.gif
http://www.filz.us/files/df8a62bc/d4e/javelin_collab.gif

Previews:
battle with Waffles
http://www.filz.us/files/5a125d5a/887/Battle_C-2.gif
http://www.filz.us/files/5a125d5a/887/Battle_C-2.gif

Older animations:
Random schtuff
http://www.filz.us/files/ca05f55f/529/acrofail_2.gif
http://www.filz.us/files/b46e112f/813/fllare.gif
http://www.fileize.com/files/7d5910a7/131/joint.gif
http://www.fileize.com/files/7d5910a7/131/joint.gif

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Rookie : Tue May 21, 2013

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Beginner: 01-03-2013, 12:52 PM

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Chamel
03-25-2013, 07:44 PM
These look great Sharp! I really like the humor in the first one! The one that bothers me the most though is the third... It seemed rather slow-paced, especially if it is Sonic. His running seems to be too slow so try to quicken that up and you'll have a better animation :)

F*** YOU AND YOUR ABILITY TO ANIMATE BETTER THAN ME (╯□)╯︵ ┻━┻

Sharp
03-25-2013, 07:48 PM
These look great Sharp! I really like the humor in the first one! The one that bothers me the most though is the third... It seemed rather slow-paced, especially if it is Sonic. His running seems to be too slow so try to quicken that up and you'll have a better animation :)

F*** YOU AND YOUR ABILITY TO ANIMATE BETTER THAN ME (╯□)╯︵ ┻━┻

Yeah I felt that the Sonic one was rather slow but I didn't bother to change it since I'm laaaaaaazy.

umad

Zed
03-25-2013, 08:40 PM
There was something wrong with all of them it's really hard to pin down. I think it's a kind of stiffness. A stickman should be free and bouncy, but your guys look a little arthritic, most noticeably the orange one in the third animation. Aside from that they're great. All the technical stuff is there, it's just the feel that's off.

Stickly
03-25-2013, 08:59 PM
hahaha is the purple guy me? :3

Sharp
06-06-2013, 03:13 AM
hahaha is the purple guy me? :3

Nope.


There was something wrong with all of them it's really hard to pin down. I think it's a kind of stiffness. A stickman should be free and bouncy, but your guys look a little arthritic, most noticeably the orange one in the third animation. Aside from that they're great. All the technical stuff is there, it's just the feel that's off.

Yeah I don't have a clue what I should do to make them look "bouncier" :1



^EDIT^
UPDATE BITCHIS

ANOTHER UPDATE I UPDATED THE WHOLE THREAD : LEGIT


Edit: Guess it's time to update the thread again :I

Stickmanias
06-06-2013, 03:36 AM
I like the Pivot Fire effect :>
Look pretty nice. Like it