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flashfree-k
03-26-2013, 01:11 AM
http://filz.us/vqF

what do you think

Jobet
03-26-2013, 01:20 AM
too fast and so wobbly , but you improve

Ezy
03-26-2013, 10:29 AM
No, no no no no. Cmon make something longer. The kicks are off, and the spine moves without the person getting bigger or smaller. Keep practicing but if you want to improve, make longer finished tests. Do not add sounds before adding reactions. It's a way to cover up the animation.

flashfree-k
03-26-2013, 11:18 AM
No, no no no no. Cmon make something longer. The kicks are off, and the spine moves without the person getting bigger or smaller. Keep practicing but if you want to improve, make longer finished tests. Do not add sounds before adding reactions. It's a way to cover up the animation.

tell me why you think the kicks are off and how i can make it better

Ezy
03-26-2013, 11:29 AM
The first kick coming down is choppy, the 3 kick combo looks weird because of the gradient color you used and how it bends. It's overall wobbly and a bit choppy.

Cruel
03-26-2013, 11:32 AM
You're improving, but it was pretty wobbly. Just smoothen your movements out more and ease a bit more. I liked the flow of it though.