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siberboy
03-27-2013, 09:09 AM
Its a long time since I animated last.
So I decided to make something.
An Unrest animation (after one month rest).
Unrest (http://www.filz.us/vzy)
please CnC.

Hatchet Haro
03-27-2013, 06:25 PM
It's pretty smooth. However, there's something about the physics and the movements in your animation that I can't really put my finger on. I think that you need to put in more easing into the animation itself. That jump before that stick punches into the ground wasn't too good. He jumped up at an angle and suddenly flew down, which isn't good. Parts of the movements are also too slow and some even looked absurd, such as that really large step the stick took in the middle of the animation.
So, in summary:
Pros
-Smooth
Cons
-Slow
-Movement
-Easing

siberboy
03-28-2013, 05:59 AM
It's pretty smooth. However, there's something about the physics and the movements in your animation that I can't really put my finger on. I think that you need to put in more easing into the animation itself. That jump before that stick punches into the ground wasn't too good. He jumped up at an angle and suddenly flew down, which isn't good. Parts of the movements are also too slow and some even looked absurd, such as that really large step the stick took in the middle of the animation.
So, in summary:
Pros
-Smooth
Cons
-Slow
-Movement
-Easing
thanks for the CnC.
I gave up speed and force,so that I can make my animation smoother.
And the part where you mentioned about the physics and movement-I don't get it.