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Alien
03-27-2013, 10:17 PM
Wanted to post some anims before I go to bed and Dispa-...

Well.Just look at these anims:

Wave Joint:a joint with wave we never got to, made 2day or something....
http://filz.us/vGN

Guz:Dedicated to the buddy Guz.
Thats my new style~
http://filz.us/vGR

Old Havoc Weekly 1-begining of february?
just old stuff
http://www.fileize.com/view/83d7b8b5-0aa/


CnC please.Thanks us all stickpage
:3

jdogg
03-27-2013, 10:32 PM
Wave Joint: There's not really much wrong with it, except for being too short. The small kick he does needs a little more easing and less stiffness, and the flip looks kind of off but I think it's just because the landing was only halfway done.

Guz Anim: The second attack was just bad. You couldn't see what was happening and it all looked really jumbled and shaky. The reaction on this punch and on the slam both had the same problem; you didn't take momentum until account. When he falls back after the punch he falls at the same speed the whole time, and it looks strange. His head should start to fall faster and his legs should move up in the air, instead of being bent the same angle the whole time. This makes it looks stiff. The same thing happened on the slam, his speed his consistent instead of starting slow, and then slamming real quickly, and the limbs are bent the same way the whole time, once again looking very stiff.

Havoc Weekly 1: This one was really sexy. Only thing wrong I noticed was that the arm he shot off disappeared.

Xyper
03-28-2013, 10:02 AM
Good animation quality, but everything is unfinished.
Make something longer >:(