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Smashman
03-31-2013, 06:32 AM
Some stuff like... this random thing: http://www.fileize.com/view/f57bd69e-306/

And some thingy for mah clan: http://www.fileize.com/view/ae28fc79-914/

Their both terrible in my opinion though...

dark falcon
03-31-2013, 06:46 AM
Some stuff like... this random thing: http://www.fileize.com/view/f57bd69e-306/

And some thingy for mah clan: http://www.fileize.com/view/ae28fc79-914/

Their both terrible in my opinion though...

And You Were Right !!
They Need A Look Of Work It Need T Be Flow
And The Clan Thing !! He Should Hold The Sword At The Beginning Of It Not The End !

Jobet
03-31-2013, 07:00 AM
at least he's anims is better than you dark falcon , btw your stick figures is a bit wobbly add some smoothness and at the end of your random thing is a bit slow <.<

dark falcon
03-31-2013, 07:16 AM
at least he's anims is better than you dark falcon , btw your stick figures is a bit wobbly add some smoothness and at the end of your random thing is a bit slow <.<

Yeah I Know I've Just Start To animate good .. And I diden't mean that he suck I've seen some of his work it's better !

InfamousBonk
03-31-2013, 07:24 AM
Well I don't know what is going on in the first animation lol, but in the second one, when he starts running, it is a little wobbly. The sword shouldn't be moving like that, try to keep it a little more fluid.

Smashman
03-31-2013, 07:50 AM
And You Were Right !!
They Need A Look Of Work It Need T Be Flow
And The Clan Thing !! He Should Hold The Sword At The Beginning Of It Not The End !

He was supposed to hold the nob of the handle of the sword... lol :3

Salt
03-31-2013, 08:05 AM
Confessing they're terrible and posting them.
Fuck common sense.

Smashman
03-31-2013, 08:26 AM
at least he's anims is better than you dark falcon , btw your stick figures is a bit wobbly add some smoothness and at the end of your random thing is a bit slow <.<

IM NOT GOING BACK TO THE LINE TOOL >:O NOOOOOOOO...

Asakura赤
03-31-2013, 08:44 AM
And You Were Right !!
They Need A Look Of Work It Need T Be Flow
And The Clan Thing !! He Should Hold The Sword At The Beginning Of It Not The End !

please stfu, you don't make sense and also you don't have the required skills to call anyone rubbish.

Flashwire
03-31-2013, 02:19 PM
And You Were Right !!
They Need A Look Of Work It Need T Be Flow
And The Clan Thing !! He Should Hold The Sword At The Beginning Of It Not The End !
At first I thought you were joking, but then I read over your message once more and saw no indication of "Just Kidding". Your criticism is no way to crit a fellow animator. Your crit in no way helped Smash, the excuse to point out something in this animation with the phrase "Needs more flow" is unacceptable. I feel like you just wanted to point out something to make yourself feel like the alpha male. If you're going to point out something wrong within an animation, you have to point out how to fix it. You could have said "In the first animation when he kicked the wall and fell, the flow was very off and the body stances were very unnatural. I suggest to add some more inbetweens in the fall instead of continuous double frame. To fix the poses, think of how a real person would fall if he kicked a wall real hard. You could even try it yourself to get a better understanding on your movements and how to execute them."
As you can see, the criticism is more precise and formal. You pointed out what was wrong and how to fix it aswell which will then help the animator. I think you should look here (http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?38318-The-Guide-to-Critiquing)


Their both terrible in my opinion though...
Now here's the problem, if you think they're both terrible, why post them? If you know they're terrible and you post them anyway, that shows me that you're just looking for pity and/or praise by people. The way I see it, if you think the animation is terrible then you will get terrible results.

Cruel
03-31-2013, 02:35 PM
At first I thought you were joking, but then I read over your message once more and see no indication of a "Just Kidding". Your criticism is no way to crit a fellow animator. Your crit in no way helped Smash, the excuse to point out something in this animation with the phrase "Needs more flow" is unacceptable. I feel like you just wanted to point out something to make yourself feel like the alpha male. If you're going to point out something wrong within an animation, you have to point out how to fix it. You could have said "In the first animation when he kicked the wall and fell, the flow was very off and the body stances were very unnatural. I suggest to add some more inbetweens in the fall instead of continuous double frame. To fix the poses, think of how a real person would fall if he kicked a wall real hard. You could even try it yourself to get a better understanding on your movements and how to execute them."
As you can see, the criticism is more precise and formal. You pointed out what was wrong and how to fix it aswell which will then help the animator. I think you should look here (http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?38318-The-Guide-to-Critiquing)


Now here's the problem, if you think they're both terrible, why post them? If you know they're terrible and you post them anyway, that shows me that you're just looking for pity and/or praise by people. The way I see it, if you think the animation is terrible then you will get terrible results.

And THATS how you critique someone.