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boybreak
04-01-2013, 11:25 AM
I spend my time in this animation a lot.
hope you enjoy my animation!

http://filz.us/wqT

Xero
04-01-2013, 11:31 AM
It screams for anticipation.
In the hesitations before he swings his sword, add double frames to give off a sense that he's "Charging" in for another attack.
Also, the v-cam movement dulls the effect; I suggest you make it "follow" the direction of the attacks to keep focus on the attacker.
I like how it's really smooth though, very nice.

Syclone903
04-02-2013, 06:57 AM
Well, the actually animation is pretty good, but I noticed that his body bends awkwardly as he slashes, and there is not much anticipation or easing. As Xero has stated, try double framing the beginnning and end of the attacks. Best of luck to you.