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dark falcon
04-03-2013, 03:42 PM
Hey Everyone So this is my progress in flash for almost a Year in here i just want to compare two of my animations

-Very old one (http://filz.us/wBJ)

-new one (http://filz.us/wMb)

Cnc Please :)

Alien
04-03-2013, 04:49 PM
For your new animation,you need some serious work on your stick construction.His legs should be a bit longer than his torso, not shorter.
Also, the moves need more force and overall the animation was very choppy.If I were you, I would add more frames to the animation.Also when he fell, the blood texture or
whatever was used looked very awkward and like it was just plastered into the animation.The movements were quite stiff too.The blood effects were positioned bad as well, they flew straight up even though the hit was towards down.

Nice job though man.
There was some improvement, which is always good.

:)

Irian
04-03-2013, 06:16 PM
lol such an accurate description of movement, "head off"

TheFlashSOP
04-04-2013, 09:56 AM
very Nice! :) you have improved a lot! :)

dark falcon
04-04-2013, 04:26 PM
Thank You All Guys :)