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Kodoku
04-10-2013, 06:28 PM
So i was watching some Nhazul videos and i wanted to animate something, just to practice...

http://www.fileize.com/view/963b1db6-f47/

CnC is always welcome ♥ i know it's shitty >_>

AhdoMatic
04-10-2013, 06:37 PM
Lmao, ROLL DAT SHIT.
Looks good. Classic Nhaz finisher!

Kodoku
04-10-2013, 06:40 PM
Lmao, ROLL DAT SHIT.
Looks good. Classic Nhaz finisher!

Yeah i was watching when he animates the cross smash :3

Quik
04-10-2013, 07:01 PM
It seems like a not as good version of the cross smash Nhazul did. It's not really Zeta style it's just a semi copied Nhazul style. Also you should probably make the smoke transparency last longer.

It was ok I guess. Try something more original next time.

Kodoku
04-10-2013, 07:20 PM
So i was watching some Nhazul videos and i wanted to animate something, just to practice...




Yeah i was watching when he animates the cross smash :3

>_>

Strike
04-10-2013, 11:09 PM
Your jump is a bit weird, after jump - he should've gone more up and fall down. What I mean is that he should've done a semicircle and fall down, not stop in mid air - move towards the next point - fall.

What I mean: http://www.fileize.com/files/6d33e11a/a7f/Jumping.png

Kodoku
04-11-2013, 06:27 PM
Your jump is a bit weird, after jump - he should've gone more up and fall down. What I mean is that he should've done a semicircle and fall down, not stop in mid air - move towards the next point - fall.

What I mean: http://www.fileize.com/files/6d33e11a/a7f/Jumping.png

Ahh, yes... i get it... Thanks, good advice :3

Stickly
04-11-2013, 06:29 PM
ya, gravity was off. like he said

Hidro
04-11-2013, 06:51 PM
Gravity was off due to the fact of you relying on tweening.
To be truthful, there is little actual animation there, I would say its about 80% tweens. Try adding more frames to your explosions before you decide to tween them and make them disappear.
As I said, tweens were also the reason gravity and the jump were weird here, as a result of your tweenig, the jump does not form the arch it should be forming.
Also, reminders, gravity makes you fall faster by the second, so, yeah, that.

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Loopy
04-11-2013, 10:40 PM
gravity was off and there weren't many movements, you should try and focus on the anticipation leading up to the jump

I'll be honest I wouldn't try Nhazul style, it's best to find your own and that style is incredibly overdone, and whenever people try it they seem to think it is an easy way out of animating all the frames, I personally don't like it much because it looks like a bunch of tweens to me, would have been better imo if you animated it normally and didn't tween the smoke etc.