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xirmi
06-04-2008, 01:13 PM
Alright I uploaded this once before maybe. I'm not sure.

But I added a vcam. Just trying it out for the first time.

http://antiup.net/view/2676/

Looking at it I figured out what I did wrong. Working on another try.

Spazmodan
06-04-2008, 03:13 PM
The movements aren't good. It seems a little choppy. Needs more smoothness. The "force" in the attacks was not enough. Also, i didn't notice at all there was VCam

xirmi
06-05-2008, 12:33 AM
It is an old animation. I should have a background. Anyway I'm working on another one. Should be better, slightly at least.

Kitsune
06-05-2008, 12:47 AM
It's a tad shaky, it resizes a bit, the kick had little force for the amount of output it got, the black screen effect should be a bit more than one frame, possibly having a white impact mark where the hit hits, and you have some of your basic things down. Don't do EVERYTHING fbf when you don't need to and work on your things, and your movies will be nice!

xirmi
06-05-2008, 01:45 AM
Hmm wat do yoy mean leave a white impact mark? Like on the black background?

Juelz
06-05-2008, 02:28 AM
Bad movements. Ink not bad.

Spazmodan
06-05-2008, 05:36 AM
When the black background appears, make it have the white impact mark where he goes to hit. Maybe even make it move to show his swing. It gives it more effect.