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apocalipse
06-06-2008, 07:05 PM
Hi people!!!, I'm new in this forum, check my last animation, that i'mmaking at this right moment, its already incomplete, ok?

enter this link (without quotes): "http://antiup.net/view/2968/"

Kitsune
06-06-2008, 07:14 PM
Not bad! The stick figure ran after making his first kill with an upright upper body, which is BAD!

I liked how you did it overall.

You are back from what, or being who?

apocalipse
06-06-2008, 07:19 PM
lol, i'm back from nowhere xD, but thanks for the comments

AphoticLight
06-06-2008, 08:48 PM
i liked it but i agree with kitsune he shouldn't run like that lol...but other wise it was very smooth and had some nice easing and i liked the style to oh and welcome to the forum

mraznbuddy
06-06-2008, 09:11 PM
http://antiup.net/view/2968/ - fixed
animation wasnt bad at all. just make the joints more visible (not curved) and keep on practicing

apocalipse
06-07-2008, 07:21 AM
ohhhh, i ilke the curves, xD, its my stick style, and i will fix the running, thanks!

Lixu
06-07-2008, 07:23 AM
lame jump, too overused bends

apocalipse
06-07-2008, 07:27 AM
hehehe, i like super movs xD, and exaggerating things, i like my style with curver, cause it is different, i don't wanna follow and stick pattern and be same as others

mraznbuddy
06-07-2008, 01:56 PM
uhmm. well just to tell you, curved leg isn't a style, it just looks bad because it shows less force and unrealistic movement. And really it's not a "stick pattern," other people do it because it's more appealing to the viewers.

so I'd advise you to change that before it gets hard to get out of the habit.
keep on practicing and take people's crits instead of making up excuses.

apocalipse
06-07-2008, 05:52 PM
OK MAN!!! I'll do that, but the arms will continue curve xD, i won't change the arms, somedays before i made a run test with the not curve legs.

I won't change this animation, but the other i do, i will make the legs different

Nikiyolstik
06-07-2008, 08:46 PM
i liked it but i agree with kitsune he shouldn't run like that lol...but other wise it was very smooth and had some nice easing and i liked the style to oh and welcome to the forum
AphoticLight, you are right. That dude runs like a girl.

mraznbuddy
06-08-2008, 01:30 AM
lol ok I'm ok with the arms still curved as long as it still looks good, I do that sometimes myself, but yeah just keep on practicing and you'll get use to it.

reqtor
06-08-2008, 06:08 AM
i liek your style