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Railisk
06-07-2008, 08:47 PM
Hey all, i don't log on very often but i animate every once in a while, so here's my latest work, its just a short loop, nothing fancy. I'd say MedBiginner, maybe high if i were lucky. Rate and constructively criticize please.

http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/9056/parkourclifffallthinggiou5.gif
!~I'll be back in a while to check up on comments and maybe bump, thanks.

Dragonkof
06-07-2008, 09:03 PM
medium beginner, beginners thread.


bye bye.

Railisk
06-07-2008, 09:11 PM
Mmk, any pointers?

Dragonkof
06-07-2008, 09:28 PM
easing and getting rid of choppyness would be a start

Wounded
06-07-2008, 10:24 PM
medium beginner, beginners thread.


bye bye.

Ouch, thats a put down >.>

Anyway , it was alright , you need to work on easing it , it went rather quick to , also it was new to me and i enjoyed it.

Just work on easing it , and it was alittle choppy , most of it was alright except for the part when he trips, and the swinging of his arms are uneased.

Railisk
06-07-2008, 10:47 PM
All right, thanks, ill work on that guys.

Index
06-07-2008, 11:40 PM
The running looks good, and the fall is smooth. But the flip after the fall is choppy and the rest after that doesn't look good.

acerocks
06-08-2008, 02:41 PM
what you need to work on when he tripped it froze for a second then he fell