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GunnarJ
06-07-2008, 09:54 PM
h ttp:// w ww.swfpages.com/view/106337.htm take out the spaces...

not too good... but its my first one using a stick, and my 4th overall

Index
06-07-2008, 10:03 PM
http://www.swfpages.com/view/106337.htm
You should use a thinner brush for blood, and the pieces of head should fly out faster. If you actually made an animated explosion it would make it look a lot better.

Also, learn to draw sticks, whats with the huge fucking giraffe neck?

GunnarJ
06-07-2008, 10:53 PM
lol, I duno lmao I cant post links 'til post 20

-Hawk-
06-07-2008, 11:43 PM
*cough* *cough* why does everyone post their first animations ? geez I posted my first animation too, on NewGrounds but it was no 4 seconds test ! Seriously, practice some more before posting again buddy...

mraznbuddy
06-08-2008, 01:32 AM
http://www.swfpages.com/view/106337.htm
You should use a thinner brush for blood, and the pieces of head should fly out faster. If you actually made an animated explosion it would make it look a lot better.

Also, learn to draw sticks, whats with the huge fucking giraffe neck?

LOL you made me spit a little when I laughed.
The animation is ok for you're fourth (I think)
search up more tutorials and practice until you get better. then post something

reqtor
06-08-2008, 06:05 AM
lol :Happy: rofl that was very good for first

kayzer
06-23-2008, 09:03 AM
lol :Happy: rofl that was very good for first

ehrm.. lol? no it wasnt .. first of all. it is his 4th animation.. and its not quite good



@GunnarJ

Try animating some more.. you only animated the head part..

Lixu
06-23-2008, 12:30 PM
Try to animate your whole stick, not just the dynamite, also, maybe you should get some sounds, there is more information about that in the General Help section.
Further, work more on your fire.