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.:Twisted Symphony:.
06-09-2008, 10:37 PM
I'll just ****ing repost the damn thing because no one gave me any friggin replies last time.
The newest anim will be imaged and the rest will be links enjoy.
http://www.filecram.com/files/old skool.gif
My favorite because there is nothing like an old skool k.o.

New
http://www.filecram.com/viewfile/7183479.htm
Imaged because I like it.
http://www.filecram.com/files/877splatters redone..gif

http://www.filecram.com/viewfile/6332269.htm

http://www.filecram.com/viewfile/8932658.htm

Cartmen004
06-10-2008, 12:49 AM
hey i think ur great could you tutor me? im not a noob i can animate im border inter on pivot forum

please tutor me if you have time please :Cry:

Saha
06-10-2008, 12:58 AM
hey i think ur great could you tutor me? im not a noob i can animate im border inter on pivot forum

please tutor me if you have time please :Cry:

Do you have A.D.D?Stick to the point of this forum and don't spam.

Kk,I loled at your anims.Funny.But the jump was stiff at the end.

I don't really know what more to critic on.But I can't spot much mistakes and I think the much more experienced animators should comment.

.:Twisted Symphony:.
06-10-2008, 01:12 AM
Yesh I should get pf0 to post.

Saha
06-10-2008, 01:29 AM
Marvelous choice my man.Excellent,may I presume?Also try ultimate stickman though try posting in my forum may you?

MoD
06-10-2008, 01:32 AM
...why Is There No Explanation As To What Would Happen If Jesus Was A Waffle?

****. Now I'm Stuck Forever Without An Answer.

You Man-whore... Med Inter.

.:Twisted Symphony:.
06-10-2008, 02:14 AM
...why Is There No Explanation As To What Would Happen If Jesus Was A Waffle?

****. Now I'm Stuck Forever Without An Answer.

You Man-whore... Med Inter.
I whored you and the rating was my payment lawl, thanks.

power fuse0
06-10-2008, 02:30 AM
The flip was terrible. In order to do a backflip you need to throw his arms backwards and his back backwards on the jump so he can flow into the flip. What you have done is kinda almost a cannon bal dive, but then all of a sudden he flips backwards.
e.g, Look What i have done with the arms. (If you dont mind me posting this in your thread, if you have a problem i'll delete it)
http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/6981/backflip123es3.gif
I know its not the best example of a Flip you can get, i know. Infact the actual flip is pretty poor, but its realistic. So try getting that with the Arms.

http://www.filecram.com/viewfile/7183479.htm
Was alright i didn't like some of the movements, and i thought it was a little slow, but otherwise it was sweet.

http://www.filecram.com/files/877splatters%20redone..gif
Again some of the movements were off, but i like this weird theme you have to your animations, it beats the regular 'fighting' aspec of most animations i see these days.

http://www.filecram.com/viewfile/6332269.htm
I like the eyes idea, wierdlly, i have jsut used that lul. But i was kinda copying Justin. Nice. I think you need to put moar of a story line to your animation really though. Nice job.

http://www.filecram.com/viewfile/8932658.htm
I cant really say much about this animation at all.
lol.
Did you like My Comment? I hope it is worth of your thread. (:

.:Twisted Symphony:.
06-10-2008, 02:35 AM
I loved the post, I actually got c&c thanks pf0.
All I have against it well not really against is for the flip I used a real life backflip tutorial for it instead of your sexy pivot one http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=521NIVPIxWs
I just didn't animate it spot on thanks for pointing that out :D

MrCheesy
06-10-2008, 03:14 AM
Going from top to bottom,

I dislike the backflip. In my opinion, to do a back flip you would be pushing yourself backwards in an arking manner not jumping straight up and fliping backwards, if you know what I mean :/

Like I said before, I didn't like the jump ( physics were off ), and the pink colum should have shooted up faster to give it the strength to send the black stickman flying like that. I liked you'r use of colors...

I to, like that strange theme you have in most of you'r animations. The man getting pulled back into the hole, In my opinion, should have been animated faster, but thats just me. Every thing else seems to be fine except for some of the physics on the blocks.

Not much actual animation here. Physics were abit off on the rocks and it looks like he would jump higher/farther than what he did...

Umm.... his feet don't stay in the same position on the ground, A K A his feet are slippin and sliddin :D
Meh, not much else to say on that animation.

Is that also worthy of you'r thread?

Blot
06-10-2008, 08:45 AM
i agree with blacky and pf0.
the backflip seemed rush, and as i have tried myself jumping and then trying to flip half way through ur jump is impossible and lets just say dont try it at home lawl it hurts...... anyway back to the anim

MoD i dnt think he would be med inter yet..... i think he is still high beg border line inter..... like blacky said again, not much animation to comment on, try making a longer animation that will wow us. take your time. dont rush and try to make as many animations as u can lol

poppetje3D
06-10-2008, 12:27 PM
I like the first one.

.:Twisted Symphony:.
06-10-2008, 04:36 PM
Thanks every one for all the posts, Worthy did you think I was being an asshole or something I was just pissed because of lack of posts.

die321
06-10-2008, 04:47 PM
So uh lawl, I see you've come a long way since i used to mentor you . . . you surpassed your own master >:) Anyway, I think you're SO close to Inter.

.:Twisted Symphony:.
06-10-2008, 04:56 PM
Lawl I was inter until I left for many months.

Vorpal
06-10-2008, 05:15 PM
I know this trips the multi acount switch I just needed to see something.

.:Twisted Symphony:.
06-11-2008, 01:06 AM
bump because of new animation.

MrCheesy
06-11-2008, 02:37 AM
The kick was done nicely but whilst in the air his legs are rather stiff. It would have been nice to see him slide against the floor, even the tiniest slide :P
The upper cut ( I think it's an upper cut >_>) was also done nicely but his back went all stiff after that.
But overall I think you did a very good job and will be looking foward to any new animations.

.:Twisted Symphony:.
06-11-2008, 02:07 PM
well I was going to do some fancy effect's shit, but then I remembered that old skool is better so I just did a ko.
I am glad you like it.

zawmbee
06-11-2008, 02:09 PM
filecram sucks.
The server at www.filecram.com is taking too long to respond.

.:Twisted Symphony:.
06-13-2008, 02:15 PM
this is a bump .

Stormwalker
06-13-2008, 02:20 PM
Not bad , its actually pretty good , only thing is when the guy fell he could have bounced at least a bit , and i kinda don't like that uppercut , but otherwise good job.

die321
06-13-2008, 10:01 PM
Lol i was randomly thinking . . . do you think you can mentor your former mentor :D

pm me if you can, cause i need it to make interz :0

.:Twisted Symphony:.
06-13-2008, 10:09 PM
I would but I am not interz yet myself.

die321
06-13-2008, 10:11 PM
oh shit, I think you are . . . if I'm nearly inters with that peice of crap I did, I really think you are lol

.:Twisted Symphony:.
06-13-2008, 10:14 PM
well pf0s vote means more to my on the matter than anything so If he sais I am any level of beginner so be it.

advent_tracuer
06-14-2008, 05:50 PM
to me a backflip is a single fluid mothion in which the body is flipped over the head while the torso doesn't make it too far up from it's orrigional position

trauma
06-14-2008, 10:10 PM
the first animation was good but the bouncing floor was weird.

.:Twisted Symphony:.
06-20-2008, 12:26 PM
yup just bumping again hopefully going to animate again.

zawmbee
06-20-2008, 12:28 PM
let this die, stop bumming it, make a new animation, sheesh.