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Fluo
05-24-2013, 04:58 PM
http://www.filz.us/F5L

looking for comments and critique! :D good to be back on stickpage <3

Molgera
05-24-2013, 05:24 PM
Very smooth, but you should make it longer.

Roxxez
05-24-2013, 05:40 PM
noice. but at one point his foot seems to go "through" the edge and yeah, you should make it longer :3

Hitsuit
05-24-2013, 08:10 PM
Nice men but i can't critiqued that :(

Telepurte
05-24-2013, 08:35 PM
The anticipation for the jump isn't exaggerated enough.
An animation is always more interesting when exaggerated.

Fluo
05-24-2013, 08:38 PM
The anticipation for the jump isn't exaggerated enough.
An animation is always more interesting when exaggerated.

I'll definitely think about that man thanks

Tsang
05-24-2013, 09:03 PM
Looks good so far, but I don't really have anything to criticize. Try adding on some more animation to this, and I'll give you my input on it.
I see potential though, so go at it!