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Captain_Plantain
06-13-2008, 09:46 PM
i downloaded eztoons two days ago,these are what i have produced since i got it, the longest one i did cant be previewed as a gif because its too long(its 3828kb) so what i got ill drop here.

first things first,the first anim i did the half hour i downloaded eztoons.http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg33/Captain_Plantain/blowingup.gif

this is the second when i got a little more accustomed to it
http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg33/Captain_Plantain/blowingupforreal.gif

and i did this one today,im not too happy with it but meh
http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg33/Captain_Plantain/fightstuff.gif

raidforce
06-14-2008, 07:11 AM
eh, it is a pretty good start, but REALLY stiff with the stick figures. I like the effects though. (also, gravity wouldnt allow someone to pause for any amount of time in mid-air, so might want to fix that on your last one)

stare
06-14-2008, 01:39 PM
Acctualy much better than I expected.
You've got a basic grasp on some of the major concepts of Eztoon.
Just work on gravity, particles and more realistic movments.

Also I would post in the begginers section, it will help out your animating skills.

Captain_Plantain
06-14-2008, 01:58 PM
well i guess,but the momentary pauses in the air were supposed to be a little bit longer kinda like in an anime where the fight stops at a point to concentrate the attention on what cones right after the pause,i know its unrealistic,but i mean these guys are blasting energy out of their pants who gives a damn about gravity,but yeah i get what you mean, i would post the last two i made but like i said,they are too long to be gifs,they stop like a third of the way through

tdopis
06-14-2008, 07:09 PM
good start just make it more fluid and have more realistic motion

Lixu
06-15-2008, 02:31 AM
It's a good start, but you really need more practice

Captain_Plantain
06-15-2008, 12:30 PM
well i guess here is another one i did yesterday,well finished yesterday at any rate,it took a while cuz of the number of frames...i started and just couldn't stop.lol.
http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg33/Captain_Plantain/flyingkibattle.gif

Lixu
06-15-2008, 12:35 PM
you need to work on your beams

stare
06-15-2008, 04:49 PM
Also What is up with all the dots and lines?, edit make it look cleaner