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NewbFlasher
06-14-2008, 01:45 PM
Okay, i started testing flash yesterday, and this is what ive got, not very good, but all i got atm :P If you can help me make it better, contact me =) =) BTW, i cant post URL's before ive gotten 20 posts, so.... here it is anyways


THE REAL LINK : http://antiup.net/view/4022/

Okay, just figured something :P So i tryed to add some blood, i need all the help i can get =)

http://antiup.net/view/4027

Added a bird :P http://antiup.net/view/4031

NewbFlasher
06-14-2008, 02:38 PM
BTW, Can some1 learn me effects? like fights :P Booms, better blood effects, teleports ? :P

Thx for all responds =)

Shanto
06-14-2008, 02:55 PM
Yo are you fluent in english or are you from another country?

Just wondering.

My next post shall be determined from your answer.

Also, just work on...well...everything. Look at tuts.

NewbFlasher
06-14-2008, 02:58 PM
Yo are you fluent in english or are you from another country?

Just wondering.

My next post shall be determined from your answer.

Also, just work on...well...everything. Look at tuts.

im from another country, the "Tryed" thing ? :P i was kinda unconsentrated :P

Okay =) :P

Shanto
06-14-2008, 03:01 PM
Okay, good, then I wont flame you.

If you were from this country, then I would flame you :P

It's not "learn me" btw, its "teach me".

And tryed is tried.

And, work on spelling and grammar.

And yeah, just look at tuts.

NewbFlasher
06-14-2008, 03:02 PM
tuts ? :P

BTW, i kinda know all those grammars, but i dont use em when chatting online ;)

Shanto
06-14-2008, 03:03 PM
This isn't chatting though, use the best grammar you can.

Tuts are Tutorials, basically, guides to teach you.

NewbFlasher
06-14-2008, 03:05 PM
ok, thank you alot =)

I'll just go to Youtube and search for "How to" :P

.Aklemo.
06-14-2008, 03:07 PM
I don't know how you posted a URL with only 3 posts :/

Anyway, you need to learn some stuff about symbols and effects. Next time, try to make the head completely black, a symbol. Then make the brush thickness higher and draw the appropriate body. Oh and uh, if you wanna make it better or more detailed. Make the sky blue, draw some clouds, don't color the buildings and roads the same, windows must be equal in size, never herd of yellow windows :/ You just need some practice, use Onion Skin if you arn't right now, to help you. Read some tutorials on blood and movement. Newgrounds.com is a good place, with tutorials that kinda help a lot. =]
Be sure to read 'em if you didn't already. It was a very good animation for a first. If it really was your first EVER. Anyway, good luck on your future animations.

Opted
06-14-2008, 03:18 PM
Aklemo: I'm pretty sure the site doesn't automatically make it into a link but if you
add url tags it works. :P (maybe?)

Animation wasn't bad, you're definitely on the right track.
Make sure to keep your sticks from resizing, meaning keep them the
same size throughout the flash.

Just keep watching other people's flashes and you'll get the idea.
Keep at it.

.Aklemo.
06-14-2008, 03:23 PM
Aklemo: I'm pretty sure the site doesn't automatically make it into a link but if you
add url tags it works. :P (maybe?)

I know _'

NewbFlasher
06-14-2008, 03:55 PM
thx alot =) This is my first movie, but i downloaded it yesterday and started testing :P

and yeah, whats Onion Skin ?

and, Never heard of yellow windows? :P
BTW, i just removed the [URL] thing from the links :P

.Aklemo.
06-14-2008, 04:01 PM
thx alot =) This is my first movie, but i downloaded it yesterday and started testing :P

and yeah, whats Onion Skin ?

and, Never heard of yellow windows? :P
BTW, i just removed the [URL] thing from the links :P

Didn't quite understand you much.

You meant you downloaded FLASH yesterday, and started testing.

Onion Skin is located under the frames, the 3 boxes, the second one.
Yup, never herd of yellow windows. :P

NewbFlasher
06-14-2008, 04:03 PM
Thx =)

Yah, i ment i downloaded FLASH :P

WOrking ON my spelling :P

NewbFlasher
06-14-2008, 04:41 PM
i basicly need to learn how to move the stickman properly, anyone got a Tutorial/Link for one ?

.Aklemo.
06-14-2008, 05:09 PM
i basicly need to learn how to move the stickman properly, anyone got a Tutorial/Link for one ?

I suggest you don't double post and read the rules btw.


Here's a link: http://www.newgrounds.com/collection/flashtutorials

NewbFlasher
06-14-2008, 05:30 PM
I suggest you don't double post and read the rules btw.]

Sorry for that, didn't think about it xD
And thx ;)

Omega
06-14-2008, 05:35 PM
I don't know how you posted a URL with only 3 posts :/

Anyway, you need to learn some stuff about symbols and effects. Next time, try to make the head completely black, a symbol. Then make the brush thickness higher and draw the appropriate body. Oh and uh, if you wanna make it better or more detailed. Make the sky blue, draw some clouds, don't color the buildings and roads the same, windows must be equal in size, never herd of yellow windows :/ You just need some practice, use Onion Skin if you arn't right now, to help you. Read some tutorials on blood and movement. Newgrounds.com is a good place, with tutorials that kinda help a lot. =]
Be sure to read 'em if you didn't already. It was a very good animation for a first. If it really was your first EVER. Anyway, good luck on your future animations.

You can group the head instead of converting it to a symbol.

.Aklemo.
06-15-2008, 03:47 AM
You can group the head instead of converting it to a symbol.
I guess

And it dosn't have to be black exactly.

Lixu
06-15-2008, 03:58 AM
1. Resizing
2. Too high smoothness
3. A man doesn't die when a bird flies to his head
4. Add sounds
5. Try v-cam

NewbFlasher
06-15-2008, 06:19 AM
3. A man doesn't die when a bird flies to his head


In my fantasy he does :P

And, V-Cam ?

Still working on adding sounds :P Thx for replies =)


Srry for bad language xD

toshiryu
06-28-2008, 06:29 AM
meh. okay for a first