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dawG
06-17-2008, 08:22 AM
http://antiup.net/view/4349/

btw: 20 fps

EDIT: http://antiup.net/view/4368/

Miccool
06-17-2008, 10:15 AM
I think his head should turn to the way he's aiming?

New Generation
06-17-2008, 10:59 AM
You should add more easing. He shakes a little bit.

Then I suggest making him slightly bend over to the left with his gun in the air, bending his arm to the left too and then to the right(with his body) obviously with easing. From slow to fast and "Bam!". Shoot.

Dunno! Just a suggestion.

killeq
06-17-2008, 11:34 AM
Could have used some turning in the legs, arms and head. The movement wasn't very fluid. The style is amazing though. I love the way you drew the guy. I say you should keep the style, for sure.

guitarhero1236
06-17-2008, 12:18 PM
nice anim style, but it looks like hes about to jump when he bends his knees like that. if he does, it would make sense, as long as you had the gun come up as he lunges. but like this it would be hard for him to keep his balance. try less of a lean? or make him jump and shoot? i dont know. :P

dawG
06-17-2008, 12:59 PM
Thx for all the comments!