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bazamm
06-20-2008, 08:26 AM
My first stick figure flash movie. I have realised from hanging round the forums that asking for people to give Constructive Criticism is like asking a stone to bleed. So, Fire away.

http://img154.imageshack.us/my.php?image=firstflashmovieod4.swf

Just finished a new one. Still dont know how to add sound!!! QQ

My second animation.

http://img171.imageshack.us/my.php?image=stickredvblacklayervcamzj4.swf

-Hawk-
06-20-2008, 08:33 AM
Go on practicing... you still got a lot to learn.

It was pretty bad but keep on trying.

bazamm
06-20-2008, 08:38 AM
I will, dont worry :Happy:

Schwa
06-20-2008, 11:13 AM
What fps are you using?

It looks really low, its kind of difficult to pull off low fps.

I'd try going with 18-24, you need a lot more frames for your movements.

Make your sticks taller and less fatish, more humanish, that way it's easier to make them do human stuff.

Lixu
06-20-2008, 12:42 PM
Use sounds, v-cam, and you should practice more! :)

colt love
06-20-2008, 01:22 PM
i agree with most people you just need to practice more

and give your stick men elbows and knees :)
oh and make them take steps

but good for a first better then i was
keep at it

passos354
06-20-2008, 08:06 PM
you need muuuuch more practice, the sticks movements are too hard..but if you keep practicing you can become a really good animator!

bazamm
06-21-2008, 12:26 AM
Cool. Thanks for the advice everyone. I have started making a new animation with a Vcam. And also, can someone tell me how to get sound in flash? i couldnt find a tutorail or anything. Thanks

bazamm
06-21-2008, 05:36 AM
Added a new animation to my first post.