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leo4life
06-20-2008, 10:00 PM
:Happy: should i finish this?
http://antiup.net/view/4844/

edited.
http://antiup.net/view/4970/

SSOutPhase
06-20-2008, 10:38 PM
yes! :Happy:

leo4life
06-21-2008, 01:45 AM
bumb, anymroe comments?

Dinomut
06-21-2008, 02:06 AM
the physics were a bit shaky, and sometimes the momentum would just disappear or appear out of nowhere. other than that, its great

Lixu
06-21-2008, 02:28 AM
Pretty wobbly but really cool moves!

1 Question, what are you doing? Shouldn't you work on my collab entry? >:3

Vortex
06-21-2008, 02:49 AM
nice animation. yeah finish it, but how would it be to add some special effekts in the fight.

Drifts
06-21-2008, 05:08 AM
I think its quite a different approach from you, i kind of think you stickmen were better thiner because it brings out more action, but yeah carry on.

bazamm
06-21-2008, 09:25 AM
The reflective floor was a nice touch.

fuppy
06-21-2008, 09:36 AM
You know, I swear, if you would just make some skinnier/ less wobbly sticks, you would be amazing, because all your animations are always long.

suliro
06-21-2008, 02:49 PM
yes but to slow continue the anim and when you finish change the frame rates from 24 to 26

Ssjbryando
06-21-2008, 03:09 PM
make the sticks less thick / fat. Also its very wobbly, and I don't know the movements / hits miss something. maybe some force? That's probably it. But it was nice overall.

Sparco
06-21-2008, 07:21 PM
Maybe some blur on the floor reflection/shadow :)

leo4life
06-21-2008, 09:46 PM
http://antiup.net/view/4970/ updated, better?

SSOutPhase
06-21-2008, 11:59 PM
yes! :Happy:

Vortex
06-22-2008, 02:05 AM
yah thats great. much better with music

dawG
06-22-2008, 09:45 AM
Yeah wobbly, but great moves.

New Generation
06-22-2008, 09:56 AM
Please, make your stick figures less wobbly for goodness sake, they are too wobbly which takes away the enjoyment of the movie. Spend more time on your movements, apply more force, some special effects too and use onion skinning more accurately. Go over the movie at the end and fix all the wobbly parts. Then your flash movie will be to perfection and will be enjoyed tremendously.

leo4life
06-22-2008, 11:26 AM
yea yea, kk sure =D.
im pretty sure others will still like it.

Lixu
06-22-2008, 11:30 AM
Just a suggestion, try 1 day to find your perfect match for stick sizes. Play with the zooms, brush sizes and smoothness of the brush.
Also, if you find a perfect size in zoom 800%, no worries, you have a V-Cam for that.

New Generation
06-22-2008, 11:36 AM
Listen to Lixu!

He knows everything about virgin animators...

leo4life
06-22-2008, 08:33 PM
what?, are you making fun of me,
if you dont like my style, just dont watch my animations, >.>.

killeq
06-23-2008, 07:07 AM
Yes, but the music made it very gay. Very gay.

leo4life
06-23-2008, 07:47 AM
the music is from tekken 5, but yea, we all have our own opinions

Ssjbryando
06-23-2008, 07:51 AM
Yea I think the music fits perfectly

Vortex
06-23-2008, 08:35 AM
yah think so too. the music is good

do you animate at zoom 400 % leo ? I do. it helps a lot to make the sticks less wobbly.

SNL
06-23-2008, 09:56 PM
work on shakyness but your getting better

Vincent
06-23-2008, 10:45 PM
that was pretty good.

(wooo finaly 500 posts)

mraznbuddy
06-23-2008, 11:12 PM
like everyone said, your sticks are getting wobbly again :|
have u tried using a smaller brush?

fitzy
06-24-2008, 12:18 PM
its nice...smooth, well done (but like has been said a tad wobbly). if you finish should be good.

one suggestion though...the reflections are a really cool touch, but i dont think stuff like =O should be shown in the reflections, after all they're just meant to be facial expressions. (same goes for words)

leo4life
06-24-2008, 12:51 PM
like everyone said, your sticks are getting wobbly again :|
have u tried using a smaller brush?

cant i just say the wobblness s part of my style =/

SSOutPhase
06-24-2008, 12:53 PM
It kinda is. You've been workin on it right? But, it's still there. =/

Must be your mouse.

Vortex
06-24-2008, 02:44 PM
sry but wobblyness isnīt really a style. itīs just not redrawing each frame as carefull as the last one