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Raffi
06-21-2008, 08:59 AM
http://www.antiup.net/view/4901/
Update 2: http://www.antiup.net/view/4913/
Update 3: http://www.antiup.net/view/4982/
Finished: http://www.stickpageportal.com/watchmovie/blackvblue.html
It's probably my best, even though it's unfinished. C&C please.

Lixu
06-21-2008, 09:24 AM
Pretty nice! I see improvement, alot!
Looks a bit like cicada, no flaws.

suliro
06-21-2008, 09:27 AM
nice dude I like the health percentage

lost pariah
06-21-2008, 09:37 AM
nice wrk mn it was all fine but i think personaly tht some of the movments wer a bit fast other thn tht it was awsome ( im no ver gd at criticizeing lol) (or spelling lol) keep up the gd wrk

bazamm
06-21-2008, 09:40 AM
The health percentage won me over. Good work.

Raffi
06-21-2008, 09:42 AM
Thanks, guys. In my opinion, it goes fast. Do you agree?

Lixu
06-21-2008, 09:52 AM
No I don't.

Aycaramba
06-21-2008, 10:26 AM
It resizes.
And yes, it does go a bit fast.

Raffi
06-21-2008, 10:36 AM
Update:

http://www.antiup.net/view/4913/


I lowered the fps to 18.

Ssjbryando
06-21-2008, 10:59 AM
unlike lixu said there are clearly some flaws. not very big ones, but he resizes REALLY bad, also its way to fast, to see what's going on. but it was nice. =3

Mesmay
06-21-2008, 12:02 PM
when blue knocks black down at the end, he hits the ground WAYYYY too fast for him to not bounce at all.

Apart from that, its nice.
Oh, and perhaps change that bit of smoke, it breaks apart strangely. Too linear, if you know what I mean.

Raffi
06-22-2008, 01:39 AM
unlike lixu said there are clearly some flaws. not very big ones, but he resizes REALLY bad, also its way to fast, to see what's going on. but it was nice. =3
STILL too fast? *changes to 5 fps*

when blue knocks black down at the end, he hits the ground WAYYYY too fast for him to not bounce at all.

Apart from that, its nice.
Oh, and perhaps change that bit of smoke, it breaks apart strangely. Too linear, if you know what I mean.
The layers were being retarded when I drew that smoke and now it's stuck there forever. Goddamnit >:[

And yeah, I'll fix the hitting the ground part.

Raffi
06-22-2008, 01:55 AM
Update #2

http://www.antiup.net/view/4982/

Raffi
06-22-2008, 04:43 AM
http://www.stickpageportal.com/watchmovie/blackvblue.html

Strills
06-22-2008, 12:09 PM
Pretty much resizing, and smoe movements are just wrong.

Still, creative moves and so. Nice work.

Tawnik
06-22-2008, 01:18 PM
Raffi,yes like your User title says you have small problem with resizing :|

BUT

It was really good,smooth,nice movements,pretty good at all :]

Hackor Pickel
06-30-2008, 05:43 AM
the health % was a good idea, smooth 'n stuff :D