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Mesmay
06-21-2008, 11:54 AM
http://www.antiup.net/view/4892/

Comments, crit, etc?

The Dude
06-21-2008, 11:56 AM
It's awesome... and... emotional?

Schwa
06-21-2008, 12:01 PM
I didn't like the blood.

Like, not enough frames or something. And it was ugly.

Mesmay
06-21-2008, 12:06 PM
It's awesome... and... emotional?

Lol thanks. Emotional? :P


I didn't like the blood.

Like, not enough frames or something. And it was ugly.

Um.. ugly? explain please.
Also, I know what you mean about the blood. Thanks.

Rabstar
06-21-2008, 12:10 PM
whoa thats.... quite aa lot of blood

Lixu
06-21-2008, 12:12 PM
terkoiz is that you? good animation.

Ssjbryando
06-21-2008, 12:16 PM
You didnt have to steal terkoizes moves mesmay. (;0.....jK)

I didn't like the blood, It dissolves to fast, it drops to fast (just look at the ground the whole animation). Also the blood on the wall is really poo poo color, make it less dark. Try cutting yourself open (lol don't) but if you bleed, your blood is clearly redish, this looks mega ultra darkish.

but the movements were ok. a bit resizing but it was good. =|

Fringo2
06-21-2008, 12:33 PM
i do not understand this huge craze of suicides...

anyways the blood was rough other then that great job

Lixu
06-21-2008, 12:43 PM
It's fun to animate.

-Hawk-
06-21-2008, 01:12 PM
A good entry.

I don't have to say anything. The scores 8.5/10 and 10/10 SAY IT ALL

Very good but slightly hurried.

Schwa
06-21-2008, 02:48 PM
Lol thanks. Emotional? :P



Um.. ugly? explain please.
Also, I know what you mean about the blood. Thanks.

I mean the blood was ugly.

And also go make comments in my thread.

Mesmay
06-21-2008, 05:08 PM
Yes master.

passos354
06-21-2008, 07:13 PM
hey great animation man!for how do you animate on flash? just one thing, when the blood falls, there's none on the ground..you could add that to your anim to make it more realistic!
keep with the good job! =]

Sparco
06-21-2008, 07:15 PM
try to avoid wall blood, unless you stick is right next to one. and if you do that type of blood, make it squirt the way he stabs ;)

and i think you have overdone the camera shake .

T Man
06-22-2008, 12:08 AM
LMAOOOOO,

well blood needs some work, it's stylish, but somethings not right about it.

awesome though C:

bazamm
06-22-2008, 01:30 AM
Good, but he stabs himself after he falls to the ground dead.

Raffi
06-22-2008, 01:57 AM
terkoiz is that you?
lol


That was awesome. It was a bit too fast though. I couldn't understand what was going on, he stabbed himself somewhere, fell over, got up again and died again in less than 3 seconds.

Strills
06-22-2008, 12:05 PM
Blood needs alot of work.

There should be more blood on the walls, and it should be thicker. Meh.

It was still awesome.