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Sherbet
06-23-2008, 03:33 PM
this is my first storyline animation... i think.

c&c please

things not to include cuz i already know

1) choppy
2) bad physics

http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/9836/sherbsstickymaniaxy9.gif
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/9836/sherbsstickymaniaxy9.gif (http://imageshack.us)
By steadels (http://profile.imageshack.us/user/steadels)

MoD
06-23-2008, 03:39 PM
I see no storyline, just some bitch running around killing some people doing nothing.

HE IS MURDERAH.

Automaton
06-23-2008, 04:28 PM
practice a bit more before trying a longer anim.

.:portal jumper:.
06-23-2008, 05:10 PM
Veryy choppy, uneased and stiff


Move ever joint in each frame to prevent stiffness


and look for a tutorial for easing and smoothing

Sherbet
06-24-2008, 12:10 PM
thanks guys... any more?

btw... the dude is killing people because the organization killed his father, im currently working on the trailer

Caz
06-28-2008, 12:28 AM
ohh ok

still it doesn't make anysense