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Checkers
06-24-2008, 03:04 PM
I have the intro as a MC because I didnt want the whole intro to play when I tested the movie. It's an upcoming anim that's hopefully going to turn out well. I need to add another Black Stick, and I'll doo that now. I'll keep you guys updated on this.
http://www.antiup.net/view/5346/

UPDAEEEETS: http://www.antiup.net/view/5364/
C&C pl0x

Schwa
06-24-2008, 03:08 PM
The stick is drawn weird and I did not like that flip at the end.

Also the teleport was lame.

Checkers
06-24-2008, 03:11 PM
What could I improve on the teleport and the flip? Also, Your usertitle is not true.

Schwa
06-24-2008, 03:15 PM
What could I improve on the teleport and the flip? Also, Your usertitle is not true.

If you combine the past present and future than it is.

The flip looked weird, it just doesn't look good, probably because his legs are bent so much and he stayed at the peak too long. The sticks look weird, they are be needing the feet.

The teleport just looks lame. It's like a time saving device. Since you obviously don't feel like animating particles for the teleport how about you remove the blur and then see what it looks like?

Also like make it either shrink or expand really fast.

New Generation
06-24-2008, 03:19 PM
Quite funny,lol. When he hits the wall. Is he blind? Apparently he looks blind.

Anyways nice smooth movements. The easing was not badly done and the special effects were simple but atleast not filter whore alert" ones.

For the intro it's coming along nicely. Thought make it more interesting. Put some more funny scenes in there and different type of a fight. Not just the same one guy vs 100 other guys in a massacre. Something new, original!

Your blood thought should stay in the air for a longer period so it will be more noticeable. Also add more particles. Some of the movements are a bit wobbly.

Good luck.

Checkers
06-24-2008, 03:20 PM
If you combine the past present and future than it is.

That makes me think to loud then I get a headache. ILL USE LOJIX FOR DIS WUN. I'm her brother, and I see her leik, evury dai. So I know the people she sees. OLOLOLOLOLOOLOLOL But there is one SPP member we did see IRL. And it was Spitz.

@James I'm getting some other people from SPP to be some of the bosses in thin animation, so it will have a little flavour to it. (When it's done)

Schwa
06-24-2008, 03:22 PM
That makes me think to loud then I get a headache. ILL USE LOJIX FOR DIS WUN. I'm her brother, and I see her leik, evury dai. So I know the people she sees. OLOLOLOLOLOOLOLOL But there is one SPP member we did see IRL. And it was Spitz.

Stop thinking, you'll just hurt yourself.

Checkers
06-24-2008, 03:35 PM
I allready have dude, I allready have.

Schwa
06-24-2008, 03:39 PM
I allready have dude, I allready have.

Ghey, but seriously try what I said about the teleport

Checkers
06-24-2008, 03:41 PM
Ok. It's funny because its the first time i've been called ghey. I'm suprised I havn't been.
@James He didnt walk into the wall, and he's not blind. That's his reaction to a (soon to be) stick.

Checkers
06-24-2008, 04:30 PM
BUMP, and an update. http://www.antiup.net/view/5364/

Fixed teleports, added bloods, a new guy, some fixed v-cam, and bodies.

Schwa
06-24-2008, 04:31 PM
No blur on teleports.

Go to my tread.

Flip still looks weird.

Checkers
06-24-2008, 04:33 PM
ok. I'll go to your tread.

Checkers
06-25-2008, 07:14 AM
YOU GOTTA HUMP DE BUMP, YOU GOTTA BUMP DE HUMP. Srs, I needeth comments for this. And awsome updates, I added the intro with a skip button. (I'm a fucking genius)
http://www.antiup.net/view/5442/

Lixu
06-25-2008, 08:50 AM
Teleport: Make it mc, then blur y 10, high q. Next frame gone. Next frame same mc back, next frame stick

Shanto
06-25-2008, 09:02 AM
Sweet, I like it.

Vortex
06-25-2008, 09:13 AM
wow. i think itīs f***ing great

Automaton
06-25-2008, 11:30 AM
why hello terkoiz. i think that was vary vary gurd.

Checkers
06-25-2008, 02:14 PM
Thanks guys! I'm going to add some victims to his ultra sword soon. I'll be frequently updating this. :D Any moar comments?

kinto
06-25-2008, 02:47 PM
Already definitely has two "l's". As for the animation. Originality. Get.

Checkers
06-25-2008, 03:43 PM
I know. Everybody does terkoiz tributes, but I was bored and never excpected this to come out well.

Spitzer
06-25-2008, 04:03 PM
you've practised i see.

please get rid of your sig.

Checkers
06-25-2008, 04:04 PM
But why? itz sooooooo kewl tho i meen tha spinnin guz it just awzum!!!!:Nooooooo: :Cry: :Nooooooo: :Cry:

Spitzer
06-25-2008, 04:06 PM
well, at least get rid of the skull. it makes me want to **** myself with a barbed bull horn