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Reverence
06-25-2013, 05:28 AM
Hai! Welcome to my thread. Here you will find all of my animations ever since I came back from my break off animating. Old animations are gone, so don't ask for them. If you want any .pivs, just PM me.

*Thread order: Lastest animation last


Guy coming out of stomach thing.

I kinda fucked this one up with the ground placement for the loop, you can see the mistake near the end. Also the arms were a bit shaky when his stomach opened.

http://upurs.us/image/49338.gif


Hardcore Parkour

I actually am pretty proud of this one. It's pretty smooth if I say so myself, little to no shakiness, annd I liked how the flip didn't look awkward. But yeah, let me know YOUR feedback on it.

http://www.imgjoe.com/x/realism.gif


High-beg Attempt o.o

It is what it is, I'm trying to refine my skills.

http://www.imgjoe.com/x/highbegattem.gif


Blood Test

Just doing a few tests before going into a big animation.

http://www.imgjoe.com/x/bloodtest.gif


Spin-kick Test

Just doing a few tests before going into a big animation.

http://www.imgjoe.com/x/spinkickcfc.gif


YUSS. Looks like Rev's effects skillz are back :D

Title says all, I've been doing a few effects tests lately, looks like they paid off :D

http://www.imgjoe.com/x/spleenriuiu.gif


Interz attempt on DD

I've yet to wait for feedback on whether I actually made it.

http://www.imgjoe.com/x/interzatrnr.gif

Zed
06-25-2013, 01:29 PM
Hardcore Parkour

I actually am pretty proud of this one. It's pretty smooth if I say so myself, little to no shakiness, annd I liked how the flip didn't look awkward. But yeah, let me know YOUR feedback on it.

http://www.imgjoe.com/x/realism.gif



I like the jump, but I think you could make the landing a bit smoother. When he lands he goes straight down and then goes back when he stands up. If you're careful with the knees and back you could keep his head moving backwards constantly. It's kind of hard to explain. If I whore out this tutorial it might help (http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?32287-Flow-Everything-You-Need-To-Know).

Reverence
06-25-2013, 06:27 PM
Thanks for the reply and posting the tut, I'll check it out. I really appreciate it.

Pox
06-25-2013, 07:28 PM
I like the angle for the high beg attempt but their wasn't much movement in it. Judging by your other animation you just need to fix your flow but you're good in easing and foot placement.

Reverence
06-26-2013, 01:34 PM
Yeah, I've been struggling with flow recently.. But I read Zed's tut :D should be better now. Working on a new anim atm.

Reverence
06-26-2013, 04:39 PM
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