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topburger239
06-30-2013, 02:25 PM
http://www.filz.us/view/1fc6abf0-f8c/ Critique it please.

Cobalt
06-30-2013, 02:30 PM
Woo baby! I really like the speed, and the choreography of this fight. Only issue is the lack of frames. I see how you did it to increase the speed and intensity, but their are some parts that need one or two more frames to look really smooth. This is just a preference and I understand if you disagree and prefer the faster paced action. I just think it might make some attacks more coherent. Overall nice work. It reminds me of Terkoiz's shorts.

Tsang
06-30-2013, 02:54 PM
Yesyesyesyesyesyes <3 <3 <3 <3 <3~~~~~~~

Loving the speed of the overall animation. Reminds me of Jomm's Ultra Combo shorts, which are really cool in general. One of the only problems I saw were the construction of the sticks. Their joints that connect from part to part are just a little off from each other, and it makes them look a bit unclean. This can be easily fixed, however. You really improved though! :D

PivotBlimp
06-30-2013, 09:28 PM
Funny thing is I just tried something like this last night... Except yours turned out heaps better than mine xD
I think it goes against my style or something, but I'll give it another go.

Cruel
06-30-2013, 11:40 PM
You need a little bit moar easing in a few parts for smoothness... that's about it though

Killahsnail
07-01-2013, 04:28 AM
The sticks are resizing (getting smaller) alot! keep that in eye and work with guidelines.. others than that.. pretty sweet anim :> good job

KyZ
07-01-2013, 03:01 PM
If you used Guidelines... Stay within them.

If you didn't... Use them.

My work here is done, you're very welcome. Good anim btw very fast paced (as usual) Good job :)

Ezy
07-03-2013, 01:46 AM
Good good stuff Topburger the only thing is you still have to somewhat ease. You almost lost it in the kicks, they became pretty choppy. Also like everyone said, watch the resizing, they started off pretty big then got really small, mainly I think it's your spine being stiff. If you watch it almost never moves from | which makes you have to adjust by making you sticks smaller to do the kicks, causing it to resize. Atleast that's my theory. Nonetheless keep up the good work Topburger!