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Frostneuroz
07-01-2013, 09:40 PM
Made with mouse :D
http://filz.us/KyF
Time Taken: -\(o_O") i dunno know
Cnc??

Saintorin
07-02-2013, 03:14 AM
Nice, smooth, I like it ^^

Frostneuroz
07-02-2013, 04:58 AM
thanks

Hitsu
07-02-2013, 06:22 AM
Looks good dude but go check up this short critique

The smoke looks just tweened or you just tweened it,do you?
The whoops looks bad because of the line thing,try to create a better trail :D
Is the head is fire?you should make particles or animate it good to make it cool.
At the dual upperscratch,the animation looks a bit choppy that makes it bad.

Anyways nice try dude :D

Stickly
07-03-2013, 02:57 AM
Not much animation to CnC, but it looks good lol

As said before, some of the effects could use some work. Maybe try doing tests with different styles in the near future?

Frostneuroz
07-03-2013, 04:34 AM
kk thanks for CnC :)

exceld
07-03-2013, 05:11 AM
Well... I suggest you to learn more about stick figure. You need stickfigure for the body construction (http://sta.sh/011nrnk7nsmm) e_e If I see your fullbody really close, you need to fix the construction. Then, you need to make the effects better ^^ and force! You need force!

Frostneuroz
07-03-2013, 07:13 AM
oh lol kk i will learn and btw about stick construction
i did more beautiful than before here if you wanna see it
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?72025-Granade-Fail

exceld
07-04-2013, 12:54 AM
oh lol kk i will learn and btw about stick construction
i did more beautiful than before here if you wanna see it
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?72025-Granade-Fail

U MADE THAT SMOKE?!? O_O

Hitsu
07-04-2013, 01:11 AM
U MADE THAT SMOKE?!? O_O

He credited it dude lol