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Cizzil
06-30-2008, 10:11 AM
ya they suck but any advice on how to smooth them out

bulldog13
06-30-2008, 10:25 AM
I lkie the first one but the last one would be good if you had some particls

ez2animate
06-30-2008, 11:19 AM
The first ones pretty cool. On that one with the axe, when he cuts him in half, where did his arms go? In one frame with the beam thing, the thickness of it changes. Other than that they are pretty good.

bulldog13
06-30-2008, 11:21 AM
oh yeah i just noticed that his arms are not there

Cizzil
06-30-2008, 01:28 PM
oh yeah guess i wasnt paying attention

Automaton
06-30-2008, 01:30 PM
why is your first one getting a boner?

Cizzil
06-30-2008, 01:36 PM
lol its supposed to be the other arm punching an uppercut thing but if it looks better that way keep thinking its getting 1

bulldog13
06-30-2008, 03:02 PM
you are going to be a great eztoonists just keep on working hard

stare
06-30-2008, 04:57 PM
I vote practice,

2, 3, and 4 were very slow, speed them up.
You've also got a problem with resizing, Minor though.
And to smooth it out just add more frames.

the darkest white
06-30-2008, 07:37 PM
The first ones good compared to the others though it resizes alot. The other three need to be faster and also need more frames. Also for the last one, the beam is leaving the bazooka so it should leave off screan, not back into the barrel.

Tork
07-01-2008, 02:06 AM
the ideas are good, but yea.. u know, not smooth and stuff :) make it faster either