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passos354
06-30-2008, 11:47 AM
hey guys this a preview for my new sword collab!!
i'm working very hard on it!!
any critics would be good!
http://www.*************/open/1214837619
self criticism:
MY BEST ANIM EVER!!
if you would like to compair..
http://www.*************/open/1214717520
:)

-Hawk-
06-30-2008, 11:48 AM
Upload to antiup please. I can't see swfcabin.

passos354
06-30-2008, 12:48 PM
why?but ok..
http://antiup.net/view/6240/
is it ok now?=]

Checkers
06-30-2008, 12:52 PM
For some reason I don't like the jump the black makes at the end. Other than that, awsome. Good easing, It has a very nice "flow" to it aswell. Overall amazing work.

Drifts
06-30-2008, 12:52 PM
I think your sword collab entry was better, it was more smoother, the second link, the sticks were quick stiff. I think someones got a like into SSJBtyando, you done your name the same way in the top corner :P

-Hawk-
06-30-2008, 12:54 PM
Yea, I can see it, it's kwl. Good details, good movement, bad bg tho.

passos354
06-30-2008, 01:05 PM
thanks guys..
so i'm gonna work on good bg ok?
and when i said my best anim ever, i was talking about the sword one
i'm just 14..but i think i'm making progress!
moa comments plz!
:)

passos354
06-30-2008, 01:07 PM
I think your sword collab entry was better, it was more smoother, the second link, the sticks were quick stiff. I think someones got a like into SSJBtyando, you done your name the same way in the top corner :P
hehe
about the name i really got the idea from him :p(tx to bryando :]!)
but i'm thinking on a more creative one ^^

leo4life
06-30-2008, 01:40 PM
well your best animation ever was good, but work on your sounds, you made glass noises when he got pumbled into the ground. and used explosions on some of the punches that lacked alot of power, 7/10 over all =D

Ssjbryando
06-30-2008, 02:36 PM
I think your sword collab entry was better, it was more smoother, the second link, the sticks were quick stiff. I think someones got a like into SSJBtyando, you done your name the same way in the top corner :P

lol yea >_> also the style in the second one <3 lawl.

but it was much better then I expected (I looked at your avatar and the way you post..)

but it was good. stif fyesh the second, the first was smooth.

Vortex
06-30-2008, 03:38 PM
nice animation. was this done for my collab ?

passos354
06-30-2008, 03:40 PM
nice animation. was this done for my collab ?

you bet it man..
can i enter your collab?
:)
here is a better version
that i finished some minutes ago!
http://antiup.net/view/6258/

Vortex
06-30-2008, 04:11 PM
niiiiiiiiice. yea of course. your so in. thx for joining :)