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ZABI
08-10-2013, 08:48 AM
Yeah so my opponent YU : D hasn't been active since June I think, sooo yeah. I basically bailed and just ended it. Would've been longer. Idk if I would post this here. >_>

Enjoy

CnC if ya want

http://www.filz.us/view/cabfce41-73b/

quinsilva
08-10-2013, 08:52 AM
very short but looked good!

Hitsu
08-10-2013, 08:58 AM
Hey bro this is the thing i saw at your animation which is bad.

The attacks doesn't looks so solid at all.
This deserves some longer animation and some Sound effects to make it entertaining,Enzo(IDK if it's Noah or Enzo.) can't even attack once.
The Effects looks pretty decent though.
The jump looks weird because it seems the jump is constant,the upper movement is same to the falling movement.
Some movement looks stiff.

Pretty cool but you need to improve at that parts.

ZABI
08-10-2013, 09:17 AM
Hey bro this is the thing i saw at your animation which is bad.

The attacks doesn't looks so solid at all.
This deserves some longer animation and some Sound effects to make it entertaining,Enzo(IDK if it's Noah or Enzo.) can't even attack once.
The Effects looks pretty decent though.
The jump looks weird because it seems the jump is constant,the upper movement is same to the falling movement.
Some movement looks stiff.

Pretty cool but you need to improve at that parts.

Enzo is orange, Noah is Grey. Noah becomes the weapon. :|
And I guess your right about it could be better. Thanks for cnc.

Hitsu
08-10-2013, 09:23 AM
Enzo is orange, Noah is Grey. Noah becomes the weapon. :|
And I guess your right about it could be better. Thanks for cnc.

lol i thought Noah is Orange xD,btw sorry i thought he just dissapeared x3.

Alien
08-10-2013, 11:01 AM
I'm just going to restate what I told you on IRC....

This is very lazy and trashy work.Because I know you could have done a better job Zane.But you procrastinated and waited until 2 days until you finally decided to get a brain.The effects were bad and the over all combat wasn't planned out to good. Yu's first two jabs are weak and misplaced. The close ups when you used the line tool are just...come on you could have at least tweened them Zane. The faces don't fit either, and in the final scene why is the arm closes to the camera darker?Like were you even paying attention to these things?And the blur on the far arm was unneeded. Come on Zane, gosh the dojo intro and the stickpage intro combined are the same length as the animation,excluding the credits.That is pitiful.Even more so is the fact that you decided to not finish this animation because your opponent hasn't responded in 2 months.So you bet your win on inactivity. The V-cam expand was pretty bad too, it didn't fit. When Yu lands the stick position is really bad. He looks like a 4 legged animal taking a shit.And as I told you like 3 freaking weeks ago, he needed recoil. And you told me on IRC you would add 10-15 more seconds. Overall this animation was not entertaining and could have been better executed.
I give it a
6/10
I tried to help you a long time ago Zane.
:<

I hope I'm not being to aggressive and negative.

ZABI
08-10-2013, 04:18 PM
No Alien, you are exactly right, and now I could give you many excuses which half are not even worth noting, but there is none in this case. I had a month and wasted my time irresponsibly. I appreciate your concern and I won't let it happen again. Thank you for the CnC.

Xenon-54
08-11-2013, 10:35 AM
YOU TROLLED ME >:C
I LOVE DAT SONG
but yeah alien covered everything i was going to say. Why not incorpreiate some art into animation.
If you have watched some of zetabrands animations you'll notice (Especially from nhazul )
they use a full body like structure at parts to make an artistic angle. I like it and you are perfectly capable
of doing so.
Hope im correct n what i said XP

Beast!
08-11-2013, 10:42 AM
Sick bro

Mark XD
08-11-2013, 10:57 AM
it needs more easing and those back bones need some bending in then, most of it is to stiff,

but nice effects and overall performance :)

ZABI
08-11-2013, 02:21 PM
Thanks Guys

Red Death
08-11-2013, 04:01 PM
Dang Zane, if your opponent made his part I would still vote for you. Anyways nice :D

Danish04
08-14-2013, 07:57 PM
make more long bro btw its nice

nayen138
08-15-2013, 11:33 PM
Nice effects Zane