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Upps
08-27-2013, 07:17 PM
It's been forever since I last animated on Ez. A lot of rust i gotta shake off. Constructive Criticism would be much appreciated.
http://www.filz.us/files/6961c20d/0c8/fightloop.gif

Zero
08-27-2013, 09:23 PM
The loop didn't seem to work well but I can see what you were trying to do. The animation itself is decent enough, not much errors at first glance and there's always something about Easytoon that makes your work looks stylish. In a more deeper look though, the only thing that's bothering me was when the guy fell to the ground after being thrown away and he sat up way too fast and the duration of him sitting is a tad longer than it should, making it look stiff and weird to look at. The kick to the head is too slow, making it look scripted to connect the next move. Reactions are great overall and loving the perspective at the start. Keep at it

Upps
08-27-2013, 11:21 PM
Good stuff, I was wondering why i didn't like that part. My "rust" is about getting used to the duration i think im making vs the actual duration. I wanted him to stay sit to show him suffering the ache from the fall and then dodge quickly as if he was faking it. Thanks!

Zero
08-27-2013, 11:42 PM
Ah, I see your point. In that case, you didn't stress his suffering enough with his body movements. He looks like he's stretching rather than dealing with the pain inflicted on him. Don't mind that too much though, you're already a decent animator even with rust. Can't wait to see more of your stuff.

Ezy
08-27-2013, 11:51 PM
Animate on me! Upps I really like it. The perspective at the start was cool and I like the reaction of the second kick. Surprised we haven't met before :o, still good stuff. The only thing I can say being picky and watching multiple times is that I do wish that was a little bit more "bounce" on the guy that got thrown on the ground, it seems really stiff. Would've looked a little bit cooler. Once again though, i like it, break of the rust and make more for me plz!