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renZen
09-14-2013, 12:26 PM
http://www.hyunsdojo.com/dojo/512/
ashsahshahshas . . . . .

super OLD but NOT GOLD

power fuse0
09-14-2013, 01:08 PM
it's nicely made, but I lost interest fairly quickly, it all seemed very similar.

renZen
09-14-2013, 01:12 PM
yup , thanks for that ! :D but dont worry , i am working on a new one , and its 10x better than that , im sure of it

AkLeMo
09-14-2013, 03:07 PM
Well hm, the first thing I'd like to say is, love your animations, regardless of how it turns out and never make excuses, be confident of them and keep an open mind.

So a few things about the animation (I see it's unfinished), I like the menu style you did, apart from the text and a few colors because it was a little hard to read. The intro was pretty neat. It seemed a bit too long because some parts were a bit stretched. The music choice initially was nice but then it went out of tune of the animation. I like how you angled the environment and showed the buildings now and then to give that "s***'s going down" effect. The length of the animation is really good. What I'd say is, try bringing an original style to your animation and everything about it. Think of something entirely new, mess around, experiment, creating your own style. Once you do that, your animation quality will improve because you are working in your own custom-comfort zone. It didn't stand out to me in many ways, but overall it was a really good effort. Nice job!

I like your spirit; and how you want to make it even better now, and you will! Just practice more.

renZen
09-15-2013, 12:32 AM
thanks a lot for that dude ! :D *cheers

exceld
09-16-2013, 07:42 AM
http://prntscr.com/1rmmk6 sure? Then, ur RHG 4 must be seriously retarded ancient >.> btw, good luck on the new one ;) (I don't want to comment that animation lol, cuz gonna wait for the final one)

renZen
09-16-2013, 07:53 AM
http://prntscr.com/1rmmk6 sure? Then, ur RHG 4 must be seriously retarded ancient >.> btw, good luck on the new one ;) (I don't want to comment that animation lol, cuz gonna wait for the final one)

lol cant see the pic , my internet sucks so much for this . XD
anyways bout wat u said , you might want to watch the animation carefully , my rhg 4 actually is kinda neat and simply good while my failed rhg 5 was randomish and nasty . watch it again for proof dude :D
and yeah , sure . you really must do your wonderful comments and cnc with my final rhg 5 work , ill be glad for it

Captainalien72
09-23-2013, 02:24 PM
I cannot wait to see both your and mark's completed battles.
My only advice is to keep your gladiator closer to redblade, that way he doesnt need to keep jet boosting himself back at redblade. It seems rather repetitive having to watch him charge at redblade after clashing swords and then ending up like a mile away from him as pio-za is moving too fast. Keep the action controlled and compelling rather than predictable . Your effects are good but the choreography and combat sequence is just as important so work on that as well.