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fatboi88
07-03-2008, 04:09 PM
http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/824/streetwalkrx6.th.gif (http://img368.imageshack.us/my.php?image=streetwalkrx6.gif)

please critique
Also try to critique on the background

New Generation
07-03-2008, 04:11 PM
Very choppy, bad easing and his arms are messed up. Don't make him shake them that idiotically.

Keep practicing.

zymn
07-03-2008, 04:51 PM
Very choppy, bad easing and his arms are messed up. Don't make him shake them that idiotically.

Keep practicing.

what she said.

yeah, hopefully you will improve.

Drifts
07-03-2008, 05:03 PM
It could use some work, try not to let the armss swing too high, reduce the toes because its disproportional. and make the stick move more realistically, he should go up and down, not to much but a bit, try to picture yourself walking, look at this tut http://www.stonesbucket.com/walking.php

Don't worry you'll get there.

fatboi88
07-03-2008, 06:08 PM
thanks guys really appreciate the help. is the back ground ok?

AppleSauze
07-03-2008, 08:09 PM
Is that Pivot or Flash?? But anyways keep up the good work and take a look at a few tutorials.

Sparco
07-04-2008, 04:30 AM
ok

NEVER EVER save your FLASH files as GIF.

Vortex
07-04-2008, 05:07 AM
jup thats a gif. export as a swf and then upload it somewhere