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Adiman
12-06-2013, 04:58 PM
Hey guys, this is my first real fight animation, wanted to test the waters and see what is possible and what you guys think of it. Comments and criticisms appreciated.
http://adiman2370.deviantart.com/art/First-Fight-418181717?ga_submit_new=10%253A1386374174

raapaax
12-06-2013, 07:51 PM
you did great but you gotta add more easing, and practice does reactions a bit, move more the body, it looks to stiff, make a basic dance anim like, the body moving like making a wave, that will be good for practicing flow, and you gotta add more easing

Spectre
12-06-2013, 07:53 PM
not bad for a first fight, but what is with the red guy's head at the end? it kinda rolls up his body. I just find it a bit confusing

Atomicapple
12-06-2013, 08:16 PM
The last blue position is wierd. fix that.

Syber
12-07-2013, 05:27 AM
not bad for a first, BUT THE RED's head rolled and it was like WHAM - RACK - TUCK - TANG - *roll......*

Adiman
12-07-2013, 09:35 AM
Yeah... it was supposed to be an epic neck-snapping, but I gues I messed it up...

Spectre
12-07-2013, 09:57 PM
Yeah... it was supposed to be an epic neck-snapping, but I gues I messed it up...
you should have put a little more emphasis that it was a neck-snap, maybe added a sound effect or something.

Adiman
12-08-2013, 04:54 PM
you should have put a little more emphasis that it was a neck-snap, maybe added a sound effect or something.
There was a sound effect, maybe it wasn't loud enough... oh well, I'm onto my next project, BSE v5 Round 2...