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Fuzzybrain
12-14-2013, 10:44 AM
Hi all... I decided it was time for me to move out of beginners flash section, and here I am! Enjoy, and CnC please.

http://fuzzybrain200.deviantart.com/art/Bestsequenceexecutionversionfiveroundtwo-419635813

DiPi
12-14-2013, 11:04 AM
I know I shouldn't say this, but to me it seems more a porn :3

CnC
you need practically more work on everything
-you should use sfx in a more considerate way, not casually
-use a pre-determined stick construction and do not exit from it (this means, no resizing, no wrong stick-construcions...)
-practice more on flow, fluidity and v-cam use: the anim was messy and it's really difficult to understand what's happening
-when you make angles, try to imagine what you are seeing from that point of view, otherwise they "give a bad taste" to the overall animation
-understand which effects can help the viewer understand what's going on and practice on how to do them
-never add random effects without properly understanding in which occasions they should be used for and how (I refer to the black radial gradient you used)

Atomicapple
12-15-2013, 05:58 PM
I know I shouldn't say this, but to me it seems more a porn :3


Agreed.
Also go back to the beginners section. Work on everything and practice.