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vianbni
12-24-2013, 11:43 PM
I want to improve in flash, so i made this animation :D
Its 18 fps btw :P

http://vianbni.deviantart.com/art/Flash-Practice-1-422080936

Adiman
12-25-2013, 03:54 PM
Ok...:
-The stick himself is wobbly, try to smooth them out/ get smooth lines for his body.
-It looks like his forward arm punches twice in a row, was that what you were going for?
-There is some sliding going on in the footwork
-His arms, legs, and body all get re-sized during the animation, try to keep it consistent...
Hope this helps :)

Phantom Ace
12-25-2013, 03:59 PM
I want to improve in flash, so i made this animation :D
Its 18 fps btw :P

http://vianbni.deviantart.com/art/Flash-Practice-1-422080936

It's actually wobbly, needs more force. It looks stiff for me. You should make the fps higher. Like 24fps above because the animation is slow................

vianbni
12-28-2013, 03:50 AM
thanks for all the cnc guys :D
i really apreciate it :)

S.A.R.X
12-28-2013, 03:51 AM
too short o_O