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flashfree-k
12-28-2013, 07:03 PM
http://www.deviantart.com/art/practice2-422920810

cnc will be accepted.

Atomicapple
12-28-2013, 08:39 PM
The gravity was horrible during the reaction that sent the victim flying. Try to make a neat arc instead of that choppy stuff.
The attacks were pretty good but the reactions were meh.

Amf
12-29-2013, 08:53 AM
everything atomicapple said. the first reaction where he gets hit downward from the staff, with the big sound and the force of it, it felt like he should have been alot more affected by it, like his head should have gone down alot more. balance was really off when black guy slams the grey guy down really hard. black guy slams him and recovers and leans back way too fast. also the very end hit, the black guy just stops in the position of the throw, he should have followed through and continued going to the right
Just keep practicing, your lookin alright