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Tun3
12-30-2013, 12:08 AM
Here's My Second Demo For My RHG Current - http://www.filz.us/view/1c56881d-6ee/

inferno222
12-30-2013, 12:50 AM
well the link isn't right :s

Captainalien72
12-30-2013, 12:52 AM
Haha he just gave a link to filz XD
Dude. That's literally just the link to the homepage.

Tun3
12-30-2013, 11:31 AM
oh dang mb guys the link's been changed T_T

S-Critical
12-30-2013, 04:40 PM
ok, I see that this one of your first animations, so let me help you out so you can become better :)

The things you were able to do good:

You were able to do good anticipation when the blue stick fig prepares to jump
You were able to use basic filters to enhance an attack
you have a basic understanding on how to animate electricity
you were able to animate a decent run loop

The things you have to improve on

Your run loop did not look quite right

http://www.filz.us/files/d8efcc3c/567/reference_for_CNC_2.png

This reference picture should help you make your run loops better

If you want more help doing run loops, watch this video

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g4Iu4rHWSjs&index=15&list=PL94164AE5777D03B8

The jump shouldn't be a rotation, unless he is doing a flip

Take the olympic long jump for example, they don't have any rotation-like movement at all.

http://www.filz.us/files/447019a5/1ed/reference_for_CNC_3.png

This guide can help you do jumps more properly

If it doesn't help, Hyun did a good tutorial on it.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O1Q_ZiHhElY&index=6&list=PL94164AE5777D03B8

The fight was WAY too quick

I'm not sure if you were trying to achieve Jomm's fast pace fights or not, but even Jomm needs to make it smooth to an extent. You need to add much more inbetween frames to make it more smoother and double frames for anticipation and easing (double framing for easing can be an option. Animators like Tatel and Leo4life don't double frame)

Use more easing on the smoke ( AND don't get into the habit of doing lazy smoke. Even though you didn't do it in your anim, don't.)

Try to look at miccool's smoke and other animators' smoke, and you can see that they always ease it out before fading it away. Also, do not get into the habit of doing lazy smoke. Although it is quick and easy, it is very lazy.

For your first attemps of doing this, it's quite good. Just do more practice and watch more tutorials and you'll get better!

Here is a link for tutorials made by Hyun and others:
http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL94164AE5777D03B8

Nanite
12-31-2013, 06:50 AM
Dat CnC XD

Did you draw those reference images by yourself?

EDIT: Can't say anything about the anim that wasn't already said by SSB. Although, what was the thing that your RHG got stuck on?

Tun3
12-31-2013, 03:23 PM
I did and what thing did my rhg get stuck on?

Nanite
01-01-2014, 12:06 AM
I did and what thing did my rhg get stuck on?

The question was directed to SSB XD

And the thing I meant was that read mountain like thing that the red stickfig asked what it was

S-Critical
01-01-2014, 06:17 AM
Dat CnC XD

Did you draw those reference images by yourself?

EDIT: Can't say anything about the anim that wasn't already said by SSB. Although, what was the thing that your RHG got stuck on?

yeah, i did. it didn't take long though, but i thought pictures would be the best way to explain it.