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Dusticthewolf
01-19-2014, 12:45 AM
40 ~ min ezs

https://24.media.tumblr.com/6f572297d44496bef36c27962e2b15c8/tumblr_mzn0b5XanM1tp35nvo1_500.gif

https://31.media.tumblr.com/2f65fe689da94c318b3e9d35196d5103/tumblr_mzmezgxCSB1tp35nvo1_400.gif

OGrilla
01-19-2014, 02:29 AM
Good flow, timing, pace. Your art isn't bad, you can obviously draw. The influence is heavily anime, but that's not a bad thing, you're learning some good parts of the style.

Effect are lacking in detail and you spend very little time showing us the characters' body movements. You make up for this with good poses and good camera angles/pans.

Look forward to more of your stuff.

Ekzolol
01-19-2014, 02:32 AM
Oh wow. 40 minutes? You are perfectly used to fullbody, aren`t you?
I really like these two. Got a bit confused with that flying in the first animation, but it`s OK for me.
Too much heavyspacing. The force you add in almost each motion and that slow-mo thing look really cool, but they`re kinda overused, IMHO.
The dynamic of your animations have the same pattern: slow-fast-slow-fast. It`s like a rhythm and would match some music well, but again, I`m not really fond of that constant repeating. I would try to add some diversity if I were you .3.
Maybe that`s just a feature of your style, so no offense if you disagree with me on this point, OK?
Anyway, I truly like what you`re doing and hope that you keep up the good work ^_^

P.S. Checked your comic. Couldn`t stop giggling the first half of it. It`s freakin` hilarious >3< Loved the concept but didn`t understand this whole idea with lemons. It`s probably too random for me, lol. Reminds of certain phrases from "portal 2".
P.P.S. I already adore that creepy smile of the main character

Dusticthewolf
01-19-2014, 02:46 PM
Thanks you two!

Making these short animations is quite fun as it isn't too hard to control what goes on in an Easytoon (although I still need to learn all the features it has). I'll try and make some longer animations and work more inbetweens for movement. Since I'm pretty much retired from stick animation, I've gotten a lot of drawing practice in for fullbody. I hope to continue to improve.

Atomicapple
01-19-2014, 06:22 PM
I like it.
I can see no mistake at all.

Suenn
01-20-2014, 03:30 AM
Thats some great animations!

Sir Echo
01-22-2014, 08:59 PM
Yeah that would take me like a week, full body is just not my thing.