View Full Version : Short film intro + Unfinished scene

01-27-2014, 03:07 PM
OK, so I'm making a film for college titledEspinoza Begins about a guy who has a power where he sees the world as a cartoon and has powers. (Most if it will be live action.)

Intro - http://www.filz.us/view/d0abbd4c-972/
Unfinished scene - http://www.filz.us/view/9a604add-77b/

C&c would be appreciated. :) I know it's already pretty crappy though. :P

01-27-2014, 06:31 PM
That first person view of the feet was actually pretty darn epic. If it was a bit smoother, it would've been even better!

01-28-2014, 04:19 PM
Can't wait for an episode. Or short film.

01-28-2014, 04:25 PM
Damn that's epic! Keep on going man! I'm sure you will make a great vid!

01-29-2014, 08:44 AM
It's only a short film, meant to be around 3-5 minutes long. Thanks for your comments guys. :)