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leo4life
07-09-2008, 09:47 PM
i was planning on making it 3 minutes long...
but seeing how i got this collab and tons of other things i dont feel like explaing, ive come to the conclusion that ill finish this sometime in the near future. until then enjoy.
http://antiup.net/view/7967/

credits to justsolo and pepper for sound effects.

byondrage
07-09-2008, 10:12 PM
that was awsome.

bet itd be better if finished though (thats just me talkin thought)

javarush214
07-09-2008, 10:12 PM
anything was fine except for that it was damn wobbly

leo4life
07-09-2008, 10:30 PM
when you guys say "wobbly" do you mean "extremlu" wobley, or "noticibly" wobbly?

Grymm
07-09-2008, 10:56 PM
Nice, but the arms don't prop out far enough. At times it looks like the have no arms.

Tronika
07-09-2008, 11:02 PM
=( Finish it


Very good efects and physics

leo4life
07-09-2008, 11:18 PM
hmmmm.. naaa, i dont feel like finishing it :P

Blindsight
07-09-2008, 11:43 PM
B-E-A-Utiful.!.

javarush214
07-09-2008, 11:49 PM
noticeably wobbly

-Hawk-
07-10-2008, 01:08 AM
O_O sooo kewwwwlll

Schwa
07-10-2008, 01:22 AM
When did you get good at particles?

Particles were good.

Fighting was good, awesome moves and stuff.

But seriously, wobblyness.

Lixu
07-10-2008, 03:05 AM
Very original moves, and details. Those stones at the ground, Ice, very nice! If you're making something like a white room, take the time to make a gradient shadow, that should add some cool details.
Also, your animation is very wobbly, it's obvious you don't look good at your onion skin. Try to redraw perfect as it was the previous frame, maybe you should increase your FPS so you are pushed to redraw close to the onion skin, wich is easier then.
Anyways it was a great fight, original as I said, this is worth Newgrounds 4.00 when you finish it for sure!

Vortex
07-10-2008, 04:41 AM
that was so awesome finish it pls. everything was great, movements, effects....

leo4life
07-10-2008, 07:56 AM
thanks, i stopped so i can start my collab, which i havent started yet =P

Lixu
07-10-2008, 08:01 AM
Did you even read my tips? D:

leo4life
07-10-2008, 08:32 AM
yea yea, but ima stay with 24 fps

Kensei
07-10-2008, 08:38 AM
Very nice ideas and combos you really need to work on the wobbliness though if it wasnt wobbly then it would be Uber Epic plus that one sword move looked like it was from ghostfight ( The super spinny ball particle sword cutter) but yeah...

I suggest doing some short tests to reduce your wobbliness as its the only thing letting the anim down. Wobbliness is usually gotten rid of before you become a good animator I guess its not the case with you lol. I think a few tests would fix it if you actually concentrate on it.

dawG
07-10-2008, 09:45 AM
Yeah it was nice, but like javarush said your animations is too wobbly.

Raffi
07-10-2008, 10:44 AM
hmmmm.. naaa, i dont feel like finishing it :P
FINISH IT OR I WILL EAT YOUR FAMILY.

Kitsune
07-10-2008, 11:20 AM
Shadows **** up somewhere.

I've seen much worse on stickpage.com front page.

Finish and deliver.

leo4life
07-10-2008, 02:10 PM
i dunno, seems like zulu/ crazy jays mad, they closed the spp contested thread.

Ssjbryando
07-10-2008, 02:25 PM
lol yes, I wouldn't be suprised if they wouldn't pay.

it was ok/geewwwwwwd.

The ending part was the best, with the effects etc. gj. make a background and it might get on frontpage =D or not (about thebg) its good how it is I guess.

Miccool
07-10-2008, 03:02 PM
Really nice atm.. Keep it up!

Sunder Forge
07-10-2008, 03:07 PM
You gotta break your wobbly curse, it destroys it for me.
With wobbly = bland, lame
no wobbly = Idk better?

Drifts
07-10-2008, 04:46 PM
Your sticks are alot fatter than usual, the skinnier sticks were better, but still the white room (talking about the animation, not the actual white room) was great and EpiC, if you don't continue, i'll get raffi on you, then i'll eat your sticks.

leo4life
07-10-2008, 04:51 PM
hehe, sure sure, drifts im doing difrent styles is all, some animations skinny, others are fat, its just my choice.

Drifts
07-10-2008, 04:57 PM
Yeah i noticed in brawl or nothing, both 1 and 2 are skinny, white room is fat, and hitman is both, first part skinny second fat....i like the idea.

leo4life
07-10-2008, 05:01 PM
hey drift, im kinda mad you making me wait all these months for battle of the years.. 3:

Drifts
07-10-2008, 05:24 PM
lol i'm sorry, i really am, but don't worry i promised you it'll be out this years its just, so many things got in the way lol, plus this thread is all about you.

silvermarcin
07-10-2008, 05:57 PM
Nice very good reminds me of another video i saw

leo4life
07-11-2008, 10:48 AM
doesnt it ?

Lixu
07-11-2008, 10:52 AM
I really think this animation belongs on stickpage.com when its finished!