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sterken
02-24-2014, 06:40 AM
I thought im gonna make a little short gun shootout.
its ment to test it out so its really short and the animations of the black dude arn't really good.
what do you think?:confused:

http://sta.sh/0zoqbgw1j0j

flamr
02-24-2014, 08:03 AM
I like it. To make it better you could add a glow to the flare from the gunshot. Also, the legs on the stickfigures seem weird for some reason. I think the back leg doesn't have a knee or the knee isn't in the right place. Otherwise, the recoil was good and so were the particles.

sterken
02-24-2014, 08:14 AM
Ahh thx dude. Glow to the flare is a really good idea and yeah i misplaced the leg indeed.

Nafter
02-25-2014, 06:37 PM
A few tips:

The legs are usually longer than the body
Try to ease out reactions
The gunshot from the enemy stick was way too inaccurate :p

Not bad, though.

LazyD
03-01-2014, 09:06 AM
Nice. I like the flow. only, as what naft and flamr had said, the legs were longer than the body so it looked kinda awkward. Even though, still pretty cool!