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Daytrox
06-30-2014, 01:20 AM
Here's some animation I just done quickly to show im kind of improving I think...

JUMP:
http://www.filz.us/files/fd8feb6c/618/Jump.gif



RANDOM THING:
http://www.filz.us/files/e5cc520b/895/Test.gif

Please tell me what I can do to improve. You too Mizu, PLEASE

Jazzon
06-30-2014, 04:08 AM
You are honestly one of the best amateur pivot animators I've seen around here (a lot of them are pretty bad but you are pretty skilled).
The second stickman that came in the second anim made a second step too short, and forceless, and both landings could use some bigger reactions. But this was pretty nice, I can see your improvement.

Daytrox
06-30-2014, 03:10 PM
Thank you!, Nah I don't think I am, I think Mizu is one of them, Thats why I want their criticism most. But thank you very much Jazzon!

mizu
06-30-2014, 04:09 PM
You are honestly one of the best amateur pivot animators I've seen around here (a lot of them are pretty bad but you are pretty skilled).
The second stickman that came in the second anim made a second step too short, and forceless, and both landings could use some bigger reactions. But this was pretty nice, I can see your improvement.
Holy shit are you fucking blind.

Jazzon can be ignored. We cant really CnC much when everything needs working on. Grab your basics and keep em. Read Zed's Tutorial and Mitch's Tutorial on TDD and practice practice practice. Your jump was good, you moved almost all the joints all most every frame, you tried to show an actual attempt at jumping but after the jump you left everything stiff. The spacing in the jump was really good man. But again, I can't really CnC too much so really read through Zed's and Mitch's tuts and post your practice.

Daytrox
06-30-2014, 11:32 PM
Okay, Thank you very much Mizu!