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samiran
07-17-2008, 03:24 AM
Here it is

http://antiup.net/view/9620/

Have I improved?...ha have I??:Smile:

samiran
07-18-2008, 03:00 AM
Hey any one pleas C&C on my anim!!!
I got 23 views but no replies!!!!!!!!!!
paleez C&C

Vortex
07-18-2008, 03:37 AM
itīs ok but really choppy, work on smoothness

samiran
07-18-2008, 03:54 AM
Ok thanks!
I think I need to put in more frames?

-Hawk-
07-18-2008, 04:24 AM
Pretty good. You got to work on the heads of the characters, they should be more round. Work on your trails, I don't know why, but they seem a bit too big to me. Try to make them smaller and at a lower alpha, the motion is too slow for such big trails. Also work on wobbliness and reactions.

Overall it was good. It had good movement and decent reactions of those who were hit. I'd say you're medium beginner.

samiran
07-18-2008, 04:39 AM
Oh thanks a lot!
Now I Know where I am weak
and I gotta rectify those weakness
thanks again!


I didn't understand what you told about trials...were you talking about tests
or sort of?

javarush214
07-18-2008, 08:41 AM
hmm it was pretty stiff dude.. and you need to work on easing...

guitarhero1236
07-18-2008, 11:03 AM
ok dude lol it looks like his foot is a lightsaber. as in 1. why would the second guy run in and jump at his foot, then the foot barely touches him nd he flies back

Tawnik
07-18-2008, 04:32 PM
Add more frames and be more patient for the start spend one hour animating 3 seconds long walk loop.

samiran
07-19-2008, 12:50 AM
That's what I don't have...PATIENCE!
I need to work on it....
Thanks to your replies

Hackor Pickel
07-19-2008, 07:11 PM
ok dude lol it looks like his foot is a lightsaber.
i gots an idea...