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Jazzon
07-14-2014, 04:52 AM
So, I've made this, and decided to put it here to hear some CnC.
It's quite noticable that I made mistake with the legs that wooble, but the rest seems pretty fine I quess :

>> Here it is. << (http://jazzondeviant.deviantart.com/art/Full-Body-Flusk-Practice-467954680?ga_submit_new=10%253A1405334992)

Gumball
07-14-2014, 05:15 AM
kinda short, choppy, wobbly, not bad tho

you should have converted the head to a symbol from frame 1, that's just my opinion

keep practicing bud

oh and where are the FEET

Jazzon
07-14-2014, 05:24 AM
kinda short, choppy, wobbly, not bad tho

you should have converted the head to a symbol from frame 1, that's just my opinion

keep practicing bud

oh and where are the FEET

Yeah :D
I know, it is pretty choppy, though I think it is kinda alright from the waist up, but ofcourse needs more practice.
I made as many frames as I could, On the short notice, I though of making it longer, but It took the passion out of me for even making it this long.
I also, I didn't add the feet, cuz I was in a bit of a hurry ^^
Actually, I find it smood and nice from the waist up, but the legs ruined me..
Thanks for the CnC tho :D