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Nextris2000
08-19-2014, 05:04 PM
Pivoters, Flash users, mods, Artists, Venix
ive decided to tryout for metal new clan and this is wat i came up with so far :L
http://www.filz.us/files/3fb2dfa2/13f/de.gif

Stickly
08-19-2014, 06:46 PM
The stance of the lighter blue character is a bit odd. I'd have him standing at an angle. I would also suggest you change the floor color, it is too vibrant. Maybe a pasty brown of some sort. As for the eye (i think that is an eye) of the darker blue stick, i think you had a great idea for having that lens flare in there. My advice for you is to create that in a different way.

Here's a pivot animation I made that involved lens flares.
http://i.imgur.com/JN4l4T0.gif

Usually they go side to side, and not up and down, but for the eye i suggest both, as you have already done. Just use a different stick, like a simple line. It ought to do the trick.
The mouth (i think its a mouth) is pretty odd, it takes your view off other things because you try and decipher what it is. Try to make a more mouth like stick
If that's an eye, then put the other one there lol.

Due to there not being any movements, there isn't much to cnc. Good luck

Nextris2000
08-19-2014, 08:31 PM
i dont understand one thing u just said lol

Drone
08-19-2014, 08:58 PM
i dont understand one thing u just said lol

Then there's nothing we can do to help you

Xeno
08-19-2014, 09:45 PM
Do you speak english?

Nextris2000
08-19-2014, 10:32 PM
yes................... but wat he said was hard for me to understand -_-

GuardianTempest
08-19-2014, 10:37 PM
yes................... but wat he said was hard for me to understand -_-I'll try, I'll try.

Change the color of your ground, it doesn't look 'earthy' enough.
Simplify the lens flare of the dark-blue stick
The mouth in the light-blue stick looks weird, unless that's an eye then add a second one.

Alternatively, I think you should turn the two ends in your 'lens flare' pointy since they look like triangles.

I'd scribble in MS Paint but...

Nextris2000
08-19-2014, 10:40 PM
lol
on the light blue one thats his eye xD And how u make flares

Daytrox
08-26-2014, 10:21 PM
Mate
The eyes seem a bit low dont you think???

Nextris2000
08-28-2014, 12:05 AM
Xd.welll its kinda too late to.change dat