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Salt
09-06-2014, 01:50 AM
http://sta.sh/0p65n7xdmfj

Hey look I actually made a decent combo.

Alien
09-06-2014, 04:48 PM
the combo itself is okay, but the execution needs some serious work
the pacing was really weird because it sped up on some parts and then slowed down on others.
The spacing of the sticks was bad as and the animations was quite choppy. Also it's sorta slow and
the last reaction wasn't too good(the fall was too fast so wrk on them physiks)
the rest of the reactions were okay though and i like the work you put into the bg and shadows.

Atomicapple
09-06-2014, 08:12 PM
I feel like the 2nd kick and the victim falling was awkward. The kick was to fast and looked funny. I also feel like the stick should have bounced after falling that far.
I like the first couple hits though